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February 11An engine lurches and mutters to a halt. It’s so dark outside, the night is like obsidian, but I see dim headlights and a bobbing flashlight as a man tries to open the hood to the engine of his logging truck. The Hub puts on shoes and a jacket to go outside and help a stranger broke down in the night.

My friend is a retired Navy photographer. She tells people she had it easy. “Not like you,” she says to the Army soldier seated in front of her. He’s completed two tours of duty in Iraq and is reluctant to admit he has trouble sleeping. My friend pokes acupuncture needles in both his ears to reduce “stress.” No one mentions the P-word that can mar a soldier’s career. Yet the auricular acupuncture offered regularly, helps. My friend volunteers every other Wednesday at Fort Snelling and has not missed a day in seven years.

I hired a dynamic young woman to take over the education and outreach at my organization. At her first community outreach meeting, which she would take over eventually, she listens to a donation request made by the friend of a woman who is pregnant and battling breast cancer. “Please, can the co-op help her buy some healthy food.” I look over at my new hire and know I made the right choice. Tears stream down her face as she nods, yes.

Online, I follow a local social media group for news on jobs or postings for trades. A woman posts the comment, “I have a question please. Am I the only one on these Facebook sites that finds it offensive when people sadly have a tragedy in their lives.” I want  to answer, I hope you are the only one! How can another person’s tragedy be offensive? Why is it, not all people can feel compassion.

What is compassion?

Although my handy-dandy (American) dictionary defines compassion as “sorrow for the sufferings or trouble of another or others” it also defines pity with the same phrase. However, the important differentiation is that compassion is  “accompanied by an urge to help” whereas pity “sometimes connotes slight contempt because the object is regarded as weak or inferior.”

To me, the woman with the question felt pity for “people [who] sadly have tragedy” because she felt contempt for how they asked for help or handled their donations. A person in need is not an inferior human. Even a person who makes mistakes or misjudgements or lacks compassion (like this woman with a question) is not inferior.

Compassion is kind. It is merciful. It is loving. It is not withheld for the privileged few. It can even extend to horses and peat moss and all of life.

Rough Writers, Norah Colvin and Anne Goodwin, introduce us to two words that extend from compassion. Weltschmerz: “world pain” or the grief we feel at how the world keeps falling short of our expectations.   Meliorism: having a belief that the world can be improved by the actions of humans. Anne sums up the interaction of the two words:

“Both are useful: weltschmerz enabling us to care enough about what’s wrong and meliorism driving us to try to do something about it.”

That is what compassion looks like in action. Yet, another compassionate action is taking hold — #1000Speak. It is a call for 1000 voices blogging for compassion on February 20. When I think of compassionate bloggers, I think of another Rough Writer, Ruchira Khanna who writes an inspirational blog with daily mantras at Abracabadra. Imagine a concerted effort by bloggers in one day to write with words that make a difference in the lives of others!

This is what it looks like in a video created by Tamara Woods who encourages us to “break the internet with compassion”:

So this week we will tackle stories that reveal compassion. In addition to our compilation, I will link to it in my own #1000Speak post on February 20. When spreading your own stories or posts, use the hashtag for greater visibility.

February 11, 2015 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that demonstrates compassion. You can explore weltschmerz (enabling us to care enough about what’s wrong) and meliorism (driving us to try to do something about it) if you want to explore those specific terms. Consider posting on February 20, too.

Respond by February 17, 2015 to be included in the weekly compilation. Rules are here. All writers are welcome!

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Her Worth by Charli Mills

The old mare hung her head low, lips quivered above grass-forsaken dirt, ribs protruded beneath a swayed back. She was broken.

“How much you want for her,” asked the Fed Ex driver.

A lean cowboy scrawled his signature for his box. “That nag?”

“That our wine?” A beautiful woman stepped out onto the deck.

The cowboy winked at the Fed Ex man. “There’s a beauty worth buying.”

“Can’t afford that one. How much for the horse?”

He knew his boss would ask how a starving mare got into the back of his van, but already her ears had perked.

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Ranch-keeping for Rough Writers: I’m working on how to communicate my ideas for the collaboration. Bear with me as I seek my words. And, I can use an Amazon widget for the bookstore, but it’s an affiliate thing so I’m trying to verify that I would be helping you in book sales, not robbing you! That would be embarrassing to this buckaroo. But I like the idea of populating the page with the ability to purchase the books rather than link to Amazon. Is there anyone with a preference or who is not selling on Amazon?

Look for my first Rodeo post tomorrow! I purchased a real bull-riding photo (as if that’s going to help my cause for publication). Of course, I still believe in me lucky charms if you care to step over Elmira Pond Spotter and take a peek at my peat.


114 Comments

  1. Sherri says:

    What a beautiful message. And your flash made me cry…

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  2. TanGental says:

    Well you know I love the 100 voices idea so this is SPLENDID! I’m also with Sherri on the poignancy of your flash. ‘Can’t afford that one’ – too expensive to keep, to buy, to deal with emotionally – so many possibilities in a simple gruff dismissal. To do this justice I think I might look beyond Mary this week. She could do with some compassion but… Let’s see.

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    • Charli Mills says:

      I figured this would be a willing crowd and you wrote about 1000 voices, too. Aw, have compassion on, Mary!

      I like that flash teaches us how saying less can often be more. Thanks fr reading int that gruff dismissal.

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  3. susanzutautas says:

    Your flash made me feel so bad about the horse but happy that she’d more than likely be taken care of and fattened up. Shame on those people for letting her get so bad!

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    • Charli Mills says:

      Compassionate neighbors indeed! All we need to do is look around to find ways to be compassionate! Beautiful flash!

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    • TanGental says:

      Susan, that is lovely. I read something called the Kindness Blog from time to time and sometimes stories like this one leap out. It does reinforce my faith in human kind

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    • lucciagray says:

      Lovely flash. The idea of good deeds being annonymous is healing in itself. The giver expects nothing in return, not even a thank you, because the giving has no strings attached. On the other hand, the receiver is also liberated. I often feel unconfortable when I’m thanked for helping someone, and I’m not sure why. Does compassion turn into pity?

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      • Charli Mills says:

        Interesting observation. I think an expression of gratitude is healing though, although the giver might feel awkward at being noticed because that wasn’t the intent. But there’s humanity in sharing that compassion and gratitude without any further expectations. It’s expectations that create a burden, I think.

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  4. Annecdotist says:

    Lovely post, Charli, and fine example of compassion in your flash. Thanks also for linking to my post.
    The comment from your Facebook group made me smile, as if the person experiencing the tragedy is guilty of bringing it on themselves – and contaminating others by mentioning it. I do wonder, however, whether she’s someone who has had too much of a responsibility to care for others in her life, perhaps from a very young age, which could make her feel overwhelmed when hearing about others’ needs. I think it’s difficult to feel genuine compassion unless and until we’ve had it shown to us and, if I have time, I’m hoping to post about self-compassion for the 20 February compassion splurge. (As for my flash, I have no idea as yet what form it will take.)
    Regarding the Ranch housekeeping and the links for book sales, as a reader, I don’t buy from Amazon so wouldn’t follow that link. However, when my novel is published, it will be purchasable from there. Don’t really know how I’ll handle that but probably with a range of options to sellers from my own website. But to ask you to do that for all Ranchers would be far too complicated. What about each individual supplies you the link they prefer?
    Given the work that you are putting into this, and the fact that presumably sales via your site would be additional to those that authors get from elsewhere, I don’t think you’d be robbing people if you received dividends via the Amazon affiliate widget. If it makes you uncomfortable you could always find some avenue to plough it back into the collective. Probably wouldn’t be that much money anyway, would it?

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    • Charli Mills says:

      That’s an insight I hadn’t considered — that the woman with a question might actually be a woman feeling overburdened with care-taking responsibility. Finding compassion seems easiest when we think we understand what is at stake.

      Thank you for the feedback on the bookstore. I do like the ease and look of the widgets, but I’ll let each writer provide their preferential links. Amazon takes such a big chunk from writers…And no, I think affiliates make pennies. I’ll figure out an “elegant solution.”

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    • TanGental says:

      First up, I like the notion of self compassion and look forward (don’t I always) to your post Anne.
      As for sales I have sold through Amazon both ebook and paperback, as much to learn how. I think that because so many people are kindle readers Amazon is inevitable. Where do you source yours? All paperback? How can I get you mine?!!! Send you one! Using createspace for the paperback version to be complimentary to the e-version means it is expensive to have it available to bookshops. I’d need to sort out another printer for that but I’m not sure I want to carry the costs of a print run. I need to do more research I think. Smashwords has been useful to make the book available through Barnes and Noble and for Kobo but I haven’t looked recently to see about sales that way (if any).

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  5. paulamoyer says:

    Great, timely prompt, Charlie. And lovely flash.

    Mutiny

    By Paula Moyer

    Sunnie couldn’t take it anymore. True, Jean disregarded her homework. She sassed. But Jean was little. Watching Mrs. O’Brien drag Jean out of class hurt.

    “I can’t stand it!” Sunnie cried inside.

    The next day at recess, Sunnie began conspiring. “We need to stop this,” she said over and over. Finally two classmates agreed.

    During spelling class with Mrs. Pearl, Sue said, “Mrs. Pearl, Mrs. O’Brien isn’t fair.”

    Sunnie spoke up. “She’s always mean, but she picks on Jean more.”

    Annie then said, “That’s right. She picks on Jean.”

    Mrs. Pearl listened, then said quietly: “I need to know.”

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  6. Amber says:

    That horrible cowboy! Thankfully the horse is getting a more compassionate home. You did a wonderful flash, what a great way to show that animals need compassion too.

    You bring such great examples and scenarios in your posts leading up to the prompts each week. As for this #1000speak, it’s is a great way to get everyone’s voices out there and spread the message. I was asked to participate, and I agreed, but I am a little freaked out as the date approaches. I can’t wait to see what you post on the 20th, it will be brilliant I am sure! 🙂

    Let’s see what I can come up with as my flash this week…

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    • Charli Mills says:

      I was thinking back to the days when ranches, homesteaders and the army let their horses run “wild” with a yearly round-up to bring in the ones they wanted to break or ride. In years of drought, they’d die off in huge numbers and I recall Nevada cattle ranchers talking about it like it was a natural thing. After all, they are “just horses.” Or dinks, hay-burners, nags, swaybacks, jugheads…it’s amazing the number of negative names that diminish the worth of a horse. Some people get hard up around here and their animals starve before the grass grows again. So I thought up a character who might care enough…

      Don’t be freaked out — you’ll be surrounded by a 1000 other voices just as caring as you are! I think on the whole February 20 is going to shine! You got depth, chops and you’ve got this! 🙂

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      • Amber says:

        That is horrible. It really irks when you hear stories of mistreated animals. If you just stop and look them in the eyes (the animal) you can see they have personalities and feel things too.

        Thank you! It will be neat to see and read all of the different voices that day. I love that you’ve tied the prompt this week towards compassion, so for the ones who aren’t “participating in #1000speak, they still get a chance to shine through the Rough Writers.

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      • Charli Mills says:

        I’m also want to show that literature has a powerful voice, and with the stories already coming in — wow — powerful stories that examine compassion from many angles!

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    • TanGental says:

      Thing is Amber don’t be intimidated. It’s the same as here. No one is out to judge you. It doesn’t have to be Pulitzer quality. Please do post and just add to the weight of people recognising compassion on the 20th.

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  7. Love this prompt. Beautiful flash. I’m so happy for that fictional horse I can’t even… There are just too many ways to write about compassion, too many angles, that I don’t know where to start. Or end. Let’s never end. I’ll try to keep 99 words for this one, though, and have been planning on the 20th for some time now. ❤

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  8. The littlies are awake so I can’t say much, but this is such a wonderful motion and your prompt gave me goosebumps. I am always affected by those who care and fight for animals and innocents. Beautiful.

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  9. Pat Cummings says:

    Once again, your challenge speaks to an issue I was already thinking about! (You’ve got to stop peeking into my skull, Charli!)

    My flash is contrarian this week: Compassion Disjunction is at http://goo.gl/ouFV1U

    And just for the Rough Writers (and Readers), it was the notice of the death of CBS reporter Bob Simon that prompted my own compassion disjunct.

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    • Charli Mills says:

      Hee, hee…it my new app…Pat’s Skull…:-) I do like the moments when it all aligns, but I think it is part of the group synergy we collectively create. I think the Rough Writers could be an eco-solution !

      Your flash captures that hiccup we’ve developed in modern society. Often we are so desensitized, be read through horrific headlines as if it were the norm, yet we coo and weep over cute cat videos.

      I’m pondering your post, too and considering the role of humor. That’s a good point for discussion.

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    • susanzutautas says:

      Pat, I tried to get to your flash but I’m getting a message that I don’t have access to see it from my blogger account. I’ve never gotten this message before….. hmm

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    • TanGental says:

      Bloody hell, Pat that is so spot on. It p***es me off when I can snivel at a stupid RomCom (never let me watch Love Actually without tissues) and yet I can be hard headed and hearted at this constant diet of egregious loss of life. Brilliant

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    • lucciagray says:

      Great flash. It makes you think about what it takes to make a person react to sufferng and injustice. Is there just too much of it in the media, so we become insensitive? Was it the cats, or was the accumulation of suffering the straw that broke the camel’s back?

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  10. kalpana solsi says:

    Animals and compassion go together and t is my take on the prompt.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/02/rainy-night.html

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  11. […] Charli Mills has taken us on a  road along which I am happy to follow. Her prompt this week is in turn stimulated by the 1000 Speak for Compassion  #1000speak initiative. […]

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  12. TanGental says:

    I am stupidly excited this week. Here’s my little effort; now off to read what everyone else has been doing so far…
    http://geofflepard.com/2015/02/13/getting-to-the-heart-of-the-matter/

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  13. Pete says:

    Sole Mates

    “Yo Marcus, what is on your feet?”

    Marcus shrugged. His white socks glowed under the filthy pair of shoes. He got a few laughs as he did a dance and found his seat.

    “Yo, check it out,” someone said. Clinton plodded sheepishly to his desk, his steps pronounced by a shiny pair of Lebron James sneakers.

    Marcus smiled, yesterday he’d watched the snickering and pointing over Clint’s split and frayed Nike’s. Then last night he tried to put himself in Clint’s shoes. And minutes ago, when he he’d found Clint whimpering in a bathroom stall, that’s what he did.

    This was based on a story I read a few weeks back. Here’s a link to it:

    http://wric.com/2014/12/22/christmas-cheer-high-schooler-gives-classmates-new-sneakers/

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  14. Pete says:

    Here it is without the he/he’d hiccup…

    Sole Mates

    “Yo Marcus, what is on your feet?”

    Marcus shrugged. His white socks glowed under the filthy pair of shoes. He got a few laughs as he did a dance and found his seat.

    “Yo, check it out,” someone said. Clinton plodded sheepishly to his desk, his steps pronounced by a shiny pair of Lebron James sneakers.

    Marcus smiled, yesterday he’d watched the snickering and pointing over Clint’s split and frayed Nike’s. Then last night he tried to put himself in Clint’s shoes. And only minutes ago, when he’d found Clint whimpering in a bathroom stall, that’s what he did.

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  15. Annecdotist says:

    Here’s my contribution, Charli:
    http://annegoodwin.weebly.com/annecdotal/love-the-one-youre-with-another-antidote-to-valentines-day
    Currently working on my compassion post for Friday so will need to pop back later to read the rest.

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  16. […] response to Charli’s prompt: February 11, 2015 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that demonstrates […]

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  17. I love this post Charli. Awhile back I read a post that was highly critical of compassion and empathy declaring it all to be false. I argued the point with her for awhile and sadly gave up but I’m with you and 1000 speak that as bloggers if we all showed compassion and tolerance we could change the world.
    Your flash is superb. I’m so glad the horse went to a better home and the horse knew it. I’m sure they can sense kindness.
    As to your question I haven’t an answer. It probably depends how people have published them but most would have links to Amazon even if only kindle. If I was self publishing I would use lulu and link to Amazon for various reasons and then sales could be made directly or via Amazon but I haven’t as yet got a book in your/our bookstore. How exciting.
    Read the prompt today and no need for thinking cap. Went straight off and wrote. Could have done numerous but here is the first one committed to paper (so to speak).

    http://irenewaters19.com/2015/02/15/99-word-flash-fiction-compassion/

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    • Charli Mills says:

      I’m not sure I could believe that compassion or empathy are made up. I’ve felt it and it has stopped other emotions in their tracks. Unfortunately, it is a feeling and not one that everyone can easily tap into. Anne made the point about a person having to be shown compassion to show it to others. I also think we have to have it for ourselves, too. Like the compassion to accept our faults or missteps. Thank you for your feedback on the book links. You flash is absolutely beautiful!

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  18. lucciagray says:

    Your flash was great, Charli, and so were all the others I’ve read, and commented on. All so varied and thought-provoking 🙂 Here’s my take on compassion. I’ll be putting it on my blog later on.

    I closed the storybook.
    “The writer depicts a poor, hungry, and frightened little match girl with bare head and naked feet in the snow, lighting matches to keep warm, before finally dying while sitting against a wall on the pavement.”
    “That happened a long time ago, Mrs. Smith. It doesn’t happen anymore.”
    I turned on the projector.
    “The journalist was killed after watching a little baby’s horrific death. She saw shells, rockets and tank fire during the massacre.”
    “Wars are different.”
    “It’s never different. It’s the same over and over; greed, hate, violence, suffering, and worst of all…. indifference.”

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  19. rllafg says:

    Coffee Break by Larry LaForge

    Robert scooted from his early morning sociology class to the coffee shop downtown.

    Turning onto Main, he spotted someone sitting on the corner holding a crude cardboard sign: A FRIEND IN NEED. He watched as many passersby nodded with sympathy but generally avoided eye contact. Some folks tossed coins into the box without missing a step as they continued on.

    Robert checked his pocket for cash, entered the cafe, and ordered two large coffees to go.

    “Cream and sugar?” Robert asked as he plopped down next to the vagrant.

    They talked for two hours about sports, weather and politics.

    *****
    The 100-word version of this story is posted at larrylaforge100words on Flash Fiction Magazine: http://flashfictionmagazine.com/larrylaforge100words/2015/02/15/coffee-break/

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  20. ruchira says:

    I loved your take on the above topic, Charli.
    Thank you for the mention, I am honored 🙂

    My take on compassion…
    http://abracabadra.blogspot.com/2015/02/a-plate-of-food.html

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  21. Norah says:

    This is a great post, Charli. I really enjoyed reading your stories of compassion, which can be expressed in many different ways.
    #1000Speak is a great initiative and I’m pleased that you are backing it with your challenge this week. That will certainly make us all think, and hopefully, act a little more about it, for a while at least.
    Thank you for the mention and linking back to my post on meliorism. It certainly created quite a bit of discussion at the time.
    I love your flash. Even a horse needs compassion. Perhaps if we are unable to feel compassion for any creature that is suffering, we may struggle to feel compassion for others who are suffering.
    I enjoyed the video. It was interesting to hear so many thoughts about compassion. Thanks for linking, and getting us thinking. 🙂

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    • Charli Mills says:

      There is so much diversity and I think literature is a powerful way to demonstrate that. I imagine that each blogger will have a specific take or topic for compassion, so to have a compilation of many varieties of its expression is an exciting contribution! Thank you for always leading us in learning with new words and ideas. This is a good group for furthering ideas and turning them into meaningful writing. I’m glad you felt compassion for my horse character! Glad to be part of the linking and thinking! 🙂

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  22. […] reflects upon the meaning of compassion,  bringing up such definitions such as “sorrow for the sufferings or trouble of another or […]

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  23. Norah says:

    These stories are amazing Charli. What a wonderful prompt and a wonderful variety of compassionate tales. Well done! 🙂

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  24. […] a jump start on getting our compassionate juices flowing, February 11, 2015 prompt from over at the Carrot Ranch Communications: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that demonstrates compassion. You can explore […]

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  25. Amber says:

    Ha! I almost forgot to link my post back to the prompt.

    No one should have it coming.

    By Amber Prince

    https://fictionandfood.wordpress.com/2015/02/16/no-one-should-have-it-coming/

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  26. I can’t quite believe I’ve got mine in before the deadline this week – always supposing I remember to press the “post comment” button! Here’s the flash:

    Merlin Learns a New Way

    Anna thought and worked quickly, stanching the flow of blood with a cord around the man’s leg, patching up the gash the falling masonry had made, and being sure that he was safe, in mind and body, before moving on through the mass of poorer dwellings all huddled together like shy schoolgirls.
    “Next time you can do the healing, Merlin!”
    “Me?”
    “Did you think yours was to be a watching ministry while you’re with us?”
    “But surely healing’s for women.”
    “Healing’s what the ministry’s all about, whether you’re man or woman, Merlin. Get used to it, or go home!”

    … and here’s the link to the post:

    http://wp.me/p4rcRJ-p5

    Happy pancake day to ALL … oops, I mean Happy Shrove Tuesday to ALL 😉 and Brightest Blessings, as always,
    Tally 🙂

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    • Charli Mills says:

      Compassion has sparked stories this week, that’s for certain! I like this scene where Merlin is learning that healing is not just women’s work. What is pancake day? 😀 Blessings (and pancakes) in return!

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  27. Sarah says:

    I love your different stories of compassion. It can look so different, yet all comes back to the same concept. I feel sorry for (maybe pity is the right word?) the woman who is offended when people share personal tragedy. How sad that she would get to the point of putting her offence out there for strangers to see. Where must she be in her life to post something like that?

    Compassion is such a big topic, I posted something somewhat lighter, about compassion in a relationship. https://fictionaslife.wordpress.com/2015/02/17/the-same-fight-every-night/

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    • Charli Mills says:

      I could write an entire post on how odd this community is from the extremely wealthy to the extremely poor. Many people move here because they believe the economy is going to collapse. Locals don’t mind because it gives them work, digging bomb shelters and building fences. I think this person’s attitude was a declaration of what we see when people make rude comments about the homeless or disadvantaged groups. An attitude of let them be tragic or homeless somewhere else, but not here among our beautiful estates. Ah, but my task in life is to develop compassion for the misguided elite. 🙂

      Yes, it is a big topic and it’s fabulous to see so many different stories. I like the approach you take in yours!

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  28. […] Ranch is also promoting the project through her flash fiction prompt which challenges writers to: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that demonstrates compassion. In her post Charli refers to two words which have been raised and discussed by our blogging […]

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  29. Norah says:

    Hi Charli, I struggled a lot with this one, but have finally got a little something together. This one certainly took me out of my comfort zone. It’s good to have a stretch occasionally. Thanks http://wp.me/p3O5Jj-p5

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  30. […] February 11 Prompt: Compassion (Write a story that demonstrates compassion) Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch […]

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  31. Okay! I made it (I think). We have to stop meeting like this.

    http://flashfictionmagazine.com/sarahbrentyn/2015/02/16/invisible/

    What a difficult topic — so much to choose from. Thanks!

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    • Charli Mills says:

      Ha, ha! I made it here, too! My poor dog has had three seizures today and in between, my power cord went out (it’s a miracle it works at all with a battery that no longer charges) and this time it took much weeping and gnashing my teeth at my laptop before it suddenly came back on. Whew! The Hub is home now and has the dog and I’m catching up on everyone’s stories of compassion and I’m just blown away. So much depth and diversity. Thanks for showing up! 🙂

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  32. […] in the Christian calendar, it seems to me that Charli has set us the perfect prompt for her Flash Fiction challenge this week, […]

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  33. Sherri says:

    Post up Charli! Now I’ve gotta rush and make pancakes!!! Catch up soon… hugs ❤ http://sherrimatthewsblog.com/2015/02/17/compassion-99-word-flash-fiction/

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  34. […] I am sharing my response to Charli Mills’ Carrot Ranch weekly flash fiction challenge. This week’s challenge is all about […]

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  35. C. Jai Ferry says:

    Last minute entry once again. *Sigh* Someday my life will be organized and on time, right? (No, it won’t ever be that way…and that’s okay!)

    http://www.cjaiferry.com/blog/stevie-nelson-compassion-lesson/

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    • Charli Mills says:

      It’s like riding a barn sour horse — you learn that the ride is going to pick up speed at the end! 🙂 Glad to have you at the ranch! And if you figure out how to make your life organized and on time, please share the elixir!

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      • C. Jai Ferry says:

        Wow, you’re not kidding about that horse! Just when I got a few steps ahead on today’s to-do list and contemplated getting a jump start on tomorrow’s work, a skunk sprayed the dog. Right between the eyes — and 2 minutes after the store in town closed. That was an experience I was really hoping to avoid. *sigh*

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      • Charli Mills says:

        Oh, no! And once it happens you have to deal with it! Last time our dog got sprayed we had all these mason jars of Aunt Ramona’s tomato juice that no one liked to drink! But worked great on de-scenting the dog (and the Hub because he got caught in the line of fire, too). Good luck!

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  36. […] the #1000Speak for Compassion project and, closer to (my blogosphere) home, the Carrot Ranch with  Charli’s Mills’ flash fiction challenge and the responses by the Congress of Rough […]

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  37. […] February 11 Prompt: Compassion (Write a story that demonstrates compassion) Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch […]

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