Toward the pink I go. Sand and pine needles muffle my steps between trees spaced apart by an unseen arborist’s hand. What mythologies lie beyond where the sound of surf tumbles copper stones? Does Narnia await? Will the Lady of the Lake deliver up Excalibur? Where is the veil of time and can I get a ticket out of here?
With numerous bags slung over my shoulder, I descend to the shoreline with items of escape. One bag is empty; maybe I’ll fill it with found magic: Thompsonite, prehnite, unakite, jasper and rare copper agates. Under the spell of thundering waves, I can disappear for hours, days, millennia. Who knows where I go when rocks tumble and pelt my bare calves. Stone enchantments hold strong.
To sustain a journey of epic distinction, another bag holds elixir, ambrosia and Elven lembas: strawberry-rhubarb beer, cheese curds and pumpkin seed crackers. As the pink spreads through thinning clouds, a feat the sky will host for several hours before sinking the sun for the night, I spread the food across a wave worn log. It’s an enchanted feast.
The final item of escape I withdraw from a bag is a worn leather-covered Kindle. The setting is complete, and I morph into an escape artist.
Books are a vehicle of escape. Stories crafted like spells transport us to other places to become other people. For the avid reader, Narnia remains within reach. Some books play important roles — they introduce us to cultures we can’t travel to on our own. Some teach us empathy and allow us to experience the journey of a thousand others. Some make us think, provoking uncomfortable thoughts, leaving us changed at the close of the final page. Yet the books that offer pure escapism are no less valued for their transformative role.
Most days I feel in and out of life. There comes the moments where I need to focus and set up interviews to write profiles for a client. And then the professionalism breaks down when one call involves interviewing my former boss who is now retiring. I’ve been tasked, no bestowed, the honor of writing her 37 years as a leader. A fifteen minute interview stretches past an hour and I’m taken back in time to when I’d sit in her office and discuss matters of marketing with the highest expectations of authenticity and transparency. How much I learned from this woman of servant leadership, of life-long learning, of taking calculated risks to pursue one’s passion.
My passion, writing; hers, leading a cooperative movement “…to make a difference in the lives of those we are serving.” She taught me that we serve others with our gifts. She taught me that to be a writer I must serve readers. She taught me that if I created a community of writers and readers, it would only work if it is authentic. Just as her co-op worked. As she retires, a co-op that once sold $5 coupons to open its doors twice a week to sell bulk foods — local cheese, honey, oats and wheat germ — is now 12,000 members strong with 130 employees and over 1,000 customers a day. And it was grown from a small group of passionate people who still retain ownership after 40 years.
A moment of reflection whisked me away and a million opportunities presented themselves like a million different plot twists. What if I had stayed? What if we had not left north Idaho? What if Todd went into the Coast Guard and never volunteered to be a paratrooper? Our lives twist with the what-ifs, but it is the writer who works in them. Especially if plots are ones to create space for escape. I can’t escape the decisions I’ve made in life nor my circumstances, but I can escape into a pinking twilight where gems are possible and C. S. Lewis’s lion, Aslan roars among the copper included waves.
Last week, writers approached a hard challenge — Stories to Heal America. What impressed me most was how each writer tackled the prompt with authenticity. Even when ideas or perspectives varied, writers showed the grace of accepting something different from their own view. I’m always delighted at the level of creativity and how writers push the edges of the constraint of 99 words, but last week showed a greater depth of skill and communication, as well as creativity. It’s not easy to write about hard truths, to find an inroad to reach a reader with surprise or agitation.
This week, writers get to be escape artists. Run away to Cirque du Soleil, stow away on a ship, become a master magician in a time-traveling show. Think of where you might want to escape. How you can use escape in a story. Think about your favorite books to escape into. Perhaps take a mental mini vacation and write it in 99 words. Have fun this week; remember the joy of escaping into a story.
August 17, 2017 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write about an escape artist. It can even be you, the writer, escaping into a different realm or space in imagination. It can be any genre, including BOTS (based on a true story) or fantasy. You can focus on the escape, the twist or the person who is the escape artist.
Respond by August 29, 2017 to be included in the compilation (published August 30). Rules are here. All writers are welcome!
Fowl Play (from Rock Creek) by Charli Mills
“He pulled a hen egg from Roe’s ear, Da!” Cling imitated the move he saw. Lizzie squealed, and Julius practiced his own flourish. Mary stood on the porch, silent.
Cobb saddled his horse, tightening the cinch. “Well, boys, he pulled more tricks than that one.”
“How’d he do it, Da?” Monroe asked.
“The egg was probably up his sleeve. Just a charlatan’s trick.”
Cobb scowled. “I’m sure he had an accomplice. He distracted you and your Ma.”
“Stop messin’ around,” Monroe told his siblings. “Da’s gotta find where our chickens disappeared to with that escape artist.”
Time Travel Interrupted (from Miracle of Ducks) by Charli Mills
Danni disappeared into the 19th century. Darkness clung to corners and only the light of her head lamp glowed. It reflected off pieces of dull white china – service glass like you’d find in a restaurant or boarding house. She picked up barbed-wire scoured free of its earlier rust. With luck the design of the barbs would reveal the maker. Just one more clue, she thought as she reached deep into the past.
Overhead lights illuminated the school auditorium. “Hey, Dr. Gordon?”
Danni growled inwardly at the disruption to her time travel.
“Want some pizza? Archeologists have to eat, too!”
Level 6 by Charli Mills
Slick hung his brass key on Level 6. It remained; a tarnished token to a missing miner. Some thought he entered a low tunnel to follow a vein of copper. He might have fallen. Jeb reported hearing the widow-maker chipping until lunch. Maybe he collapsed. They all recalled the pasties that day. Slick’s was gone, so at least he vanished satisfied. His mother grieved. His father grumbled the boy never paid attention. Not many paid attention to Slick, the quiet sixth son of eight. Who’d suspect he’d escape the Keweenaw mines with enough native to buy a life elsewhere?
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Charli’s challenge 🙂
Thanks, Lady Lee! Hope to see you with an escape artist story. 🙂
a loop poem from me, Charli 🙂
Lady Lee, I appreciate your poet’s constraint and the forms I get to learn from you. It creates another level of escape!
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Thanks for sharing! You are welcome to join us in the challenge, too!
I wish I had writing skills or talent, I do not. My skills lay elsewhere. It’s a pleasure and an honor to share artist talents on my blog. Thank you for the offer.
Thank you for doing that. If you ever want to take those talents of yours and put them in a 99-word frame you might be surprised at the results. 😉
Lovely Charli, a really fascinating post. I like the prompt for this week and will have to put my thinking cap on. Have a wonderful weekend.
Thank you, Robbie! You have a great weekend, too!
“Thought you’d disappeared, Kid.”
“But here ya are.”
“So I ain’t somewheres else… gone! Far as folks back east are concerned, I done disappeared. If here, not there.”
“There ya go agin.”
“No, here I go. I’m here, so cain’t be there.”
“Well, it’s neither here nor there to me. Ya ready to ride?”
“Yawl go on without me.”
“Yer not tryin’ to escape yer wranglin’ are ya?”
“Wranglin’ is my escape. But they’s lookin’ fer me back east. Jist know if I ain’t aroun’ here, I’m there.”
“Maybe. But they’s ridin’ me.”
I like this, nicely done.
Thanks. I can tell you how it ends. Escape. The Kid rides the ranch after all.
The summer of the Kid’s escape. Been a pleasure ta ride with the Kid, chicken thoughts, yarns, and escapes. If you ain’t here, we’ll think on ya kindly there. The Ranch will be here for all who ride through. It’s not your destination. It’s no writer’s destinations. Those are inside of each of you. The Ranch just rides along for a spell, encouraging the traveler. Campfire will be on when you want to visit for a spell. Your yarns are always welcome here.
I hope the Kid don’t disappear for too long. It’s not fun when others are ridin’ your back though. I love Shorty’s stories. I Kid you not.
Norah and D., it’s fun to watch you two word banter! Ya both have yur wits about ya!
D. is a mighty fine contributor to the Ranch. She sure gets things moving a bit. She’s like you – full of energy!
Would you have to separate us if we were in your classroom, Norah? 😀 That was a running joke at Carroll College between Kate, me and our professors. We were in the same writing program, both older than the average student, energetic about our learning and sharing. We’d get amped up in class and feed off each other’s ideas. Professors joked that we’d have to be separated! I like to think we made classes fun.
It sounds like you made those classes worth while. How much you must miss Kate and the synergy you had. Just imagine how much of that rubbed off on the other writers. I like to think I would enjoy having your energy and creativity in the class. Wouldn’t we like to bottle it and store it for times when the thoughts don’t flow.
You two, Norah and Charli, separate! You’re making me happysad. Karen and I became quite the pair at graduate school. One professor in particular would have separated us if he dared. He did not. I made jokes about him and those times and made her laugh even on her death bed.
Hi D., sounds like you and Karen shared as special friendship as did Charli and Kate. I understand the happysad. The feelings get all mixed up we don’t know whether to laugh or cry. Nice to know you two had smiles together even as she passed. Sorry for your loss.
Pleased to hear the Kid managed to escape and will ride a while longer. I hope it was for good purpose.
Just love this clever back and forth dialogue…what characters! A classic pairing of straight guy and “wise guy”. I like the way the kid thinks!
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You really used the ol’ noggin for that one.
What a great contraption for escape, Reena!
He couldn’t escape his fate, but the cone was no match! Thanks for making me laugh, Joelle!
My pleasure. 🙂
Charli, I could see the mine, taste the pasty made with lard and sense the despair of the family which struggled to survive in the Keweenaw. The mining families of the Upper Peninsula had tough lives, but they were tough people. Was it Houghton, Calumet, Copper Harbor or one of the many other small towns which served the mining companies? I’ve been there many times and hope to return. I’m one of the trolls who live below the bridge. Leelanau County near Traverse City is my home. Good story.
Glad you enjoyed the trip to Level 6. I had in mind, Mohawk, which is one of the small hamlets between Calumet and Eagle River. It had, at one time, six mines. I recently went to an estate sale in Mohawk and saw one of those old brass ID tags. And, of course, I have a pasty every Friday. Amy J’s in Hancock are the best but Roy’s across the canal in Houghton has a Thanksgiving pasting that’s luxurious with turkey, stuffing, cranberries and gravy! A Down Stater, I’ve heard you Trolls be called. I’m an Outta Stater, newly relocated to this wondrous historic community.
A bit of humour from me today:
Thanks, Di! I love your humor!
Sometimes it can be a bit of an acquired taste!
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Escaping the escaper… an effective flash, that.
Thanks for reading my story and for the comment.
Good one with so much more to write about.
Thank you. Yes, these very short stories leave more to write about than they actually say.
Mum and son did well to escape.
Thanks, Norah. It does look like it was time for them to go.
That’s a troubling disappearance and yet written deftly. I also like your means of sharing. Thanks for joining in, Chris!
Thank you Charli. This is an enjoyable group and a fun way to see everyone’s talent.
Great work, Charli. Your words paint a lovely picture in this post. Great flashes too. For me, I think Fowl Play takes the prize!
When Mr. Melvin sang, he wasn’t the old man next door. He wasn’t even in the room. He’d escaped, to someplace far away—years away—to the cruelty that filled the pages of his notebooks. And now, as he stomped and strummed and belted out about John Henry and his hammer like it was the end of times, Nita’s arms prickled and her heart caught time with the slap of his foot on the floor. Hearing the pain in his voice, the scars of his song, Nita finally felt the full weight of what she’d agreed to take on.
There’s a deep story here already written on Mr. Melvin’s heart. And one beginning in Nita’s…what a cliffhanger at the end…
Thanks, Pete! Now I want to go listen to some Johnny Cash. And escape into that working class music “…like it was the end of times.” Great writing, such a sharp scene.
We had a dog who thought the dog catcher was Uber, the pound his spa. It slowed down after “surgery”. (see above, floridaborne)
Susan, it made my heart soar to read about Maggie and Bruce! I started writing “Bubbie stories” and that eventually led to the story idea that is Miracle of Ducks.
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humour from me
(pls delete if I’ve already done this!) thanks
I rather like this one, Di! It’s worth repeating. 🙂 Word Press was probably being glitchy. I enjoyed the humor of your flash. 🙂
Charli and Community,
I’ve been a tad distracted. I thought I left last weeks story here. I might have…but forgot to press ‘post comment’… any way here’s my take…
For Art’s Sake
(title is link to post)
This week the artist escaped. Really… Go to ozrocks.facebook.
OZ stands For Ozaukee (the u is silent) County. To encourage
both art and walking around the town, one decorates and hides
Rocks. Or just find ‘em. I did both. But all I had was one black
marker and some beach rocks. Signed ‘em with 2017 PA (being
my home state).
I’ve depicted the Lighthouse, The Lighthouse Station, the Electric
Power Plant and the door window of the Port Hotel. Also simple
designs and words. This was a wonderful no schedule escape
week for me. I go home tomorrow…
See post for more info on Ozaukee County. 🙂
I don’t know it this just started this summer or not.
But I have also read about “The Kindness Rocks Project”.
Maybe before I leave …I’ll leave a Kindness Rock. 🙂
I love the idea of kindness rocks. So simple, yet effective in spreading smiles. Just as your flash does. 🙂
Hi Jules! Some weeks are distracting, but come as you are. And rocks are always welcome. Ah! I remember how to pronounce Ozaukee from my co-op days. Fun take on the flash.
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The word “escape” reminds me of my time spent in Berlin. So Glück Auf!
That’s an amazing escape story, Diana! Thanks for teaching me a new phrase, too!
Surprising twist, Kalpana!
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Lovely post. Here’s my contribution this week:
Hmm. More peace through stone. Recurring idea around here. (Must be a good one)
Thanks, Allison! I also share your escape route to peace.
Your point about writers as escape artists is spot on!!
Aren’t we, though? Houdinis with words. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by!
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Here is my contribution, another historical tale, about an escaping artist.
The Artist Escapes
“Señor we must leave.”
The Artist nodded, reluctantly he shut his sketch book, the last detail of the inlay pattern unfinished. Portfolio handing over his shoulder he followed his guide though the empty, ruinous palace.
It had been different when he had arrived, the palace had been full of people, living in the abandoned rooms. They had welcomed him as he had drawn the wonders of the lost palace – then the plague came.
Most were dead now, he had to escape, had he done enough? Could he convince the world of the need to protect, to save the Alhambra?
When the artist and architect Owen Jones visited the Alhambra in the early nineteenth century the palace was ruinous. It was his wonderful drawings that convinced people across Europe that it had to be saved. Whilst he was there cholera broke out, it killed his companions and many of the local people, he was lucky to escape with his life. He went on to become one of the finest designers of the nineteenth century.
Engaging flash, interesting history. Thanks!
Yes, thanks to the mostly nameless artists and monks and musty collectors who knew to record and preserve what was already ancient in their times. Will look up Owen Jones!
I wrote a bit about Owen Jones a while ago, you might like to have a look. https://gordonlepard.wordpress.com/2015/05/28/colour-on-the-cards/
Thanks for the link Gordon! Fascinating stuff. It just so happens I will be in London the beginning of October, staying not far from the Crystal Palace. Perhaps I will learn more about Owen Jones visiting there. And what a charity shop Great find! I am fond of snooping around such shops myself. It was nice visiting your blog again.
There will probably be something about Owen Jones in the museum there, he was an inspirational art teacher as well as artist. His classic text book the ‘Grammar of Ornament’ is still in print. It just consists of dozens of colour plates showing different styles of design and ornament from all times and all places, as invaluable a source book for designers today as it was then.
Terrific that you introduced us an artist. I’m glad he escaped to preserve this beautiful place. Thanks for sharing your post about Owen Jones, too! Good to see you at the Ranch, Gordon.
Charli, I always forget to comment on your flashes, probably because I am still reeling from the brilliance of your posts. But how can I ignore the triple! Each sparkles and adds another rich layer to their bigger container. Each is a wonderful example of how effectively flash fiction can deliver the prompt. I remember Slick from some other piece. Your 99 words have me rooting for him in his crafty escape.
This week I try (ok, cheat) at flash non-fiction, but it’s where the prompt led. If this seems too self-serving, yank it. Just seems like I wrote a book on escape, thought I’d do a recycle/rehash.
Considering Escape D. Avery
Another wild ranch ride! Now we are to consider escape, complete with freedom of choice regarding genre. I choose 99 words each for essay and poetry. Though sometimes a desperate, self-preserving departure, escape isn’t synonymous with freedom. Escape can be passive, sense dulling, a destructive distraction, achieved through electronic devices, gambling, drugs, or other means. Escape can also be active, creative and constructive, mindful distractions that refresh and renew, through physical activity, time outside, or a hobby. Active escape can become regenerative quest. These themes were explored in Chicken Shift, poems featuring chickens, some passive, some escaping, others searching.
Back to the Egg
a bottle where
she curled up tight in
that very fragile shell.
Liquid warmth cozy
outside a living hell.
From Sister Pullet
And while her sister pullets worried
About the pecking order and who was boss
Our girl watched and waited
For the moment she would cross.
And the answer to the question
As to what was she going towards
Isn’t so much that, as that she left what she abhorred.
From Of Muskrats and Hens
We’ve spoken of muskrats and hens;
Rumi spoke of men.
You have been released from ten successive prisons,
Each larger than the last. *
(* Coleman Barks translation)
Dang it, the machine didn’t keep the spacing. The first poem is supposed to look like a bottle.
WP doesn’t like to translate formatting (nicely much less at all).
I had a Blogspot where I could do that – concrete poems.
But I closed it to a private setting. I keep Blogspot just to comment on other Blogspots. And don’t bother with formatting on WP.
It’s just too much of a pain.
While I think your poem reads very well as is, you could make an image of it in bottle-shape and add it in the comment. 🙂
Love these poems, from the clever umbrella title to the controlled use of rhyme that lends each a natural lyricism to the deeper stories they suggest. The Rumi quote tying up the last short poem…perfect.
Thanks, Jeanne. The last two are mere excerpts from longer poems; picked them for theme, pared them down for 99 word constraint. Recalling these poems got me finally to a flash for this week, which involved a vicarious escape through chickens.
Ha! My challenge is to recreate a bottle. Just know, I’m not poetic! 😀
I’m really enjoy the depth of thought behind each poem in Chicken Shift. It is great to see you share some of them here.
Thanks. Hope it’s ok to drag them out; sometimes they seem to fit.
I look forward to them every week.
Thank, D. I was feeling the flow and went with a trio. Feeling the chicken vibe, too. Happy to have your hens peck through the Ranch as you ponder escape. Fine book of poems, Chicken Shift. Gets deeper with each read — the meaning, not the nitrogen.
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Have a good weekend Charli
It went by faster than any escape artist! 🙂
Here it is!
He was a very demanding man, not easy to live with. “I only ask that things be done right”, he’d say.
“Attention to detail!” his battle cry, he expected perfection and hard work from everyone, especially his wife, rarely made mistakes himself.
Here’s a detail she noticed that morning. He left the gate open. That’s right. Upon leaving after mending a nesting box, he left the gate open.
She did her chores; hung the wash, picked beans, sat on the front porch to snap them, all the while watching the hens, one after the other, sashaying down the road.
(Just assume, in your willing suspension of disbelief, that the hens were compelled to go down the road, even cross it. Don’t ask why.)
Makes a body wonder if ‘He’ ever did comeback …
Maybe he got henpecked down the road for leaving the gate open.
The perfectionists I’ve always run into were miserable to deal with…it gave me great joy to catch them in a mistake. 😉
Wickedly satisfying! Delightful resolution…
Those sashaying hens must have been a quiet delight as she went about her chores.
Your evening escape sounds well planned and delivered, a perfect way to escape life’s harsh realities.
I enjoyed hearing about your former employer and what you learned from her. I’m sure she learned at least equally from you. Though the path of your passions may have differed, the purpose of each was similar.
Your challenge is an interesting one and invites many interpretations. I’m thinking.
Three flashes this week! How marvellous, and each with escapism of a different kind. I don’t like the sound of those chickens having assistance to escape; Danni escaping into the past through artefacts is, I’m sure, something with which you can identify; and, oh how I love the thought of escaping to a better life. It’s where I’ve been musing till now, but who knows where I may finally land.
Thanks for a wonderful post with much to ponder.
Hi Charli, I’m back with my escape plan. Where else could I flee to but picture books? I hope you like it. http://wp.me/p3O5Jj-XS
Pretty cool take, having that lot take off.
Thank you. 🙂
Wonderful take on the prompt! I’d like to escape the story of which I am the main protagonist. Oh find me a magic acorn.
Exactly what I was thinking! I’d like to escape into a parallel existence. This one’s going to be gone too soon. 🙂
Oh, picture books! Yes, a wonderful escape carer and child can share, too. I always like your words, Norah! SMAG 🙂
Thank you, Charli. I’m pleased you enjoy them. I enjoy yours. SMAG 🙂
You would like her, Norah. She was a school teacher who became a CEO, and she allowed for learning and teaching to happen in her organization. She will be missed and yet I’ve missed her these past 5 years and now hope to meet up with her in Michigan for a visit. Ah, good — I’m glad there are many possible paths to the prompt! Yes, I was feeling the flash flow this week. I look forward to yours!
Sounds like your ex-boss and I would have a lot in common. How exciting to meet up with her again in Michigan. I hope we get to hear about the visit.
I didn’t quite get the flash flowing, but figured a way out in the end. 🙂
A wonderful escape into the story of an old man who escapes.
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Loved reading about your escape to the beach, Charli, and what a wonderful story about your former boss and possible inspiration for the writers’ community you’ve built here.
Yesterday I read the prompt and wrote my flash to coincide with a review I wanted to post, thinking I’d come back to read your post when I had a bit more time. That might explain why mine isn’t quite in the celebratory spirit of the escape artist:
Two novel perspectives on humanitarian responses to wartime atrocities http://annegoodwin.weebly.com/1/post/2017/08/two-novel-perspectives-on-humanitarian-responses-to-wartime-atrocities.html
You paint a clear picture with your flash.
Nonetheless, it’s an escape and they aren’t always the chipper storybook kind! Thanks for reading, Anne and adding your response to your review.
I pray you find your peace, Charli as Todd gets healed.
I have been missing these fictions lately due to personal reasons, but am glad to be back and attached is my link.
Thank you, Ruchira! Good to see you at the Ranch!
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Hmm… it didn’t go so well for Pandora….
I like that word and title, “unboxing.”
Every day we escape if we allow our mind to. The writer in us is guided to people, places, and life in general to open the imagination escape door.
Where Do I Escape to Next?
By Ann Edall-Robson
Where will I escape to next?
Opening the fridge door, gather up some ingredients and voila, I have become a chef extraordinaire to all who sit at our table.
Easy transition from chef to chauffeur. Ball cap, rain coat, and mini-van. Go. Stop. Wait.
Laundry, shopping, cleaning and making beds. The new uniform is jeans and t-shirt. The singing maid dances around the room, dust wand mic in hand.
The day ends but not the imagination. Travels to places unknown, in the pages that I write. Dozing off to thoughts of where I will escape to next.
Drudgery, what drudgery? Instead of escaping from your work you escape right on through it! Inspiring.
Living every moment in mindful escape! I like your enthusiasm, Ann and your many roles as escape artist.
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Hey Charli. No matter what I seem to always be the tail of this flash fiction dog! But, I will make a special effort this Friday since I will be in Alaska after Saturday for a week. I hope you all enjoy this: https://fictionplayground.wordpress.com/2017/08/29/the-red-baron-is-up-to-something-carrot-ranch-weekly-flash-082417/
Better to wag the tail than be left in the dust, Joe! Glad to have your writing. Enjoy your time in Alaska — that’s a special escape!
I can’t remember if I said this already, but I told my wife since she was crazy enough to serve 25 years with me she deserved a great reward. 🙂
Congratulations to you both on 25 years of partnership and relational service! Alaska is a mighty experience and I wish you both God’s blessing for another 25 years just as mighty.
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Sorry to be so late! Back to read and comment.
Only his hands and eyes existed. And the thin strands. Cross, loop, knot; cross, loop, knot.
He wanted to give her something. The nice gringa teacher. Who looked him in the eye. Who smiled. Who explained in Spanish when he couldn’t understand.
The fat gringo voices around him faded. The rows of bunks. The sweating walls. The smell of urine.
Cross, loop, knot. A cross. A heart. A simple cord necklace.
He fingered his small creation. Thought of his village outside Culiacán. His mother. The smell of tortillas and the simmering pot of frijoles.
He could taste them now.
Wow, Jeanne. If you’re going to be late, writing something great! What great depth, entering the character incarcerated in one of Joe’s prison camps. I listened to an interview with him on the NYT’S Daily and it was unnerving to me.
I must admit I took liberties when I taught that class. I was instructed not to share personal stories or let my students do so. That turned out to be impossible for me. Yes, many of those guys did some bad things. Many others got caught doing stupid things that today might be looked at a little more leniently, such as selling or possessing pot. All of them languished in a system that was essentially punishing them before any conviction, often for months. Pretty grim. Thanks, Charli, for the nice comment!
To have witnessed Tent City is worth taking liberties to share.
Your flash is beautiful, poignant. Your post is frightening; another unpardonable episode. Oh, wait, there was a pardon.
Ah yes, a new irony to the phrase “unpardonable”! Thanks for the thumbs up on the flash 🙂
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May have got here to late but here it is https://irenewaters19.com/2017/08/30/escape-99-word-flash-fiction/
Crazy good flash, Irene.
Well, you should see my late hours! I’m always happy to get everybody in, Irene.
Thanks Charli. I can imagine your hours with the amount you achieve in a day.
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I am late to the party and missed the round-up, but here’s my bit anyway:
I think we’re having a late party, Deborah! Welcome! 🙂
It May be Late by Elliott Lyngreen
The great thing about Murray was that if he won, we all won. Like nights we would stay awake until the radio stations played our requests. He would get through and eventually hit the airwaves through the phone as if it was our song. And that was the how Murray got loose. It was not that he got through, but that we all did.
The emptiness spilled in the lost gorgeous grips of the appreciation, connection of passions to moments in radios impressing. I could not say a word about what he just knows – but I will say it now.
[not alot of time to be a writer this week, seems i still trying to escape to being an artist]
That’s a similar thing — writer escaping into art; artist escaping into writing. Like Murray, we can experience that moment! Great title given the hour. 😉
At least it was not late
Always willing to bend time! 🙂
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Hello Charli, this is a fun topic. Here is my little contribution https://robbiesinspiration.wordpress.com/2017/08/30/carrotranch-flash-fiction-challenge-escape-artist/
Glad you could join in, Robbie!