September 6: Flash Fiction Challenge

Written by Charli Mills

Charli Mills, a born buckaroo, makes literary art accessible at CarrotRanch.com. She writes about the veteran spouse experience and women forgotten to history.

September 6, 2018

It’s not a stairway, but it is a path to Heaven. I’m walking cream-colored pavers, delighting in a profusion of white flowers from sweet alyssum that hugs the path to grand clusters of panicle hydrangea the color of vintage cotton. White daisies with dark centers nod to bumbles and spindly green stalks as tall as my hips explode with blazing white stars. I’m stunned by all the beauty as if the Milky Way took to seed here on earth.

The stairway is lined with books, writing quills, and instruments of science. The stairs themselves are crafted of wrought iron, spelling out the alphabet and hidden words. A fireplace with settee and chairs beckon the reader in us all with promises of tales to unfold. Downstairs more books line the walls, and two antique cubbies form nooks in green velvet. This is not the stairs to Heaven, but to a book-lover, it might as well be.

Appropriately, the stairs to book sub-heaven grace a cluster of buildings called The Fortress, Great Hall, Classroom and Library. In the middle of a square courtyard between castle and brick walls, an iron wizard stabs his staff into the ground and reaches heavenward (actually, Heaven is on a hill behind him).

Yet there be dragons! On the castle turret of the Fortress ringed in lightning rods, a flame-skinned dragon bares teeth and strikes a paw toward Heaven below. Another dragon snarls from a dungeon three stories below. Deep Space lies between, but first one must access a wizard’s alley, Kings Cross, a slide down the Rabbit Hole into Wonderland, a trek across a desert and more dragons, including one that protects a hoard of computer hardware.

You might be surprised to learn that my son, Runner, works near Heaven. His workplace is epic — a 950-acre campus of strange, fantastical and out-of-this-world offices, classrooms, and employee space comprising the Epic Systems Corporation Intergalactic Headquarters. It’s a software company to support the healthcare industry and is privately owned by the most successful female IT company founder in the world.

When Runner got the job five months ago, we celebrated his success. Friends in  healthcare gushed, “He must be so smart.” Epic has a reputation for hiring the most brilliant, and we always knew Runner was as bright as his sisters. He is a Project Manager, and it’s interesting to hear of his company’s value-based operations. I read them on a bathroom wall (and yes, the bathroom was epic).

Our running joke as Runner gave the family a tour was that everything lives up to the company name, including the wind turbines to power the campus, organic farms to feed the near-10,000 employees, underground parking garages, and an 11,000-seat stadium built five stories underground in a complex called Deep Space. I straddled a rattlesnake, battled dragons, and chased Alice down a slide to Wonderland. I walked down Diagon Alley, but by another name thus not to infringe upon HP copyrights. However, J.K. Rowling is quoted on several walls.

Here’s a drone-eye view of Epic:

You can also learn more about the company through stories and snapshots at Epic’s website.

We took a few photos of our own, although it was hard to break away from simply experiencing the place with Runner as our tour guide. Over the weekend, I saw other proud families grinning and gawking as sons and daughters led the way. My daughter joked that her brother joined a cult. My SIL wanted to join if only to play D&D on campus. He fell for the dragons.

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We finished our tour just beyond Heaven at The Farm where cows and sheep lurk in the hallways. After an epic walk across campus, we grabbed Cow Bikes and pedaled back to The Fortress where Runner had parked his brand new Mini Cooper in the Great Abyss. We later enjoyed his mixology talents (he supported himself through college as a bartender), including a rum daiquiri Hemingway used to drink. Because we were in Wisconsin, I ate cheese every day I was there. Heaven!

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Now, to write!

September 6, 2018, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write about an epic workplace. It can be real or imagined. Go where the prompt leads.

Respond by September 11, 2018. Use the comment section below to share, read and be social. You may leave a link, pingback or story in the comments. Rules & Guidelines.

 

Upward Mobility (from Miracle of Ducks) by Charli Mills

Mist rose from the pond with the morning coolness of a mountain camp at 7,000 feet. Danni stretched in sun salutations on the sagging porch of her Forest Service cabin while coffee percolated. The aroma grew strong, and she padded back inside on bare feet to pour a cup. The rest she saved for her thermos. As she drove her quad toward the archeological dig, Danni spotted elk, a skittering coyote and a Cooper’s hawk. At the worksite, trenches waited for the volunteers who would follow. She contemplated her epic workplace. At last, Danni would be the lead archeologist.

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164 Comments

  1. syncwithdeep

    Oh lovely writeup and breathtaking video Charli.. I loved the playback music in the video.. Thanks for the video

    • Charli Mills

      Thanks, Deepa! I really like these drone videos that let you see from above.

  2. Norah

    Wow! What an epic workplace. Runner/Mixologist has done very well. Your saying that he was as clever as his sisters amused me. I’m sure there was never any doubt. Thanks for the links. I enjoyed finding out a little more about the organisation and its founder. I am impressed that she has pledged 99% of her assets to the Giving Pledge. She sounds like a reasonable employer with some interesting regulations e.g. dress. I’m not sure that I’ve ever experienced an epic workplace, but I’ll see how I go with the prompt.

    • H.R.R. Gorman

      I have a friend who worked for Epic when the company was much smaller; I’m really glad they’ve taken a lot of work environment lessons from when they were a startup company.

      • Charli Mills

        Oh, that’s interesting H.R.R. I think they started to build this “epic” campus in 2010. I’m sure it was intense to build a company like this from the ground up. The work environment now is amazing. But expectations of productivity and service are high.

      • Norah

        Sounds wonderful.

    • Charli Mills

      It’s epic, including the dress code! I’m not sure I’d want to be there on a day when there are no visitors… Her pledge to philanthropy is amazing, following the lead of the Gates. When you see the campus, you can see how much energy and creativity is invested in making it a inspiring place to work.

      • Norah

        It is like no other I have seen or could even imagine. I’m impressed that someone/s did imagine it and carry it through the creative process to make it a reality.

      • Charli Mills

        Can you imagine a school with that kind of campus? It’d a unique place!

    • Norah

      Hi Charli,
      Here’s my contribution: It’s EPIC. https://wp.me/p3O5Jj-1d7
      I hope you enjoy it.

      It’s EPIC

      Roll up! Roll up! Come one, come all. This new attraction will have you enthralled. Bring parents, bring partners, siblings and friends. No one’s excluded. It’s Earth’s latest trend. Your eyes won’t believe. Your ears won’t deceive. It’s a sensory explosion, for all to explore. It’s entertaining, electrifying, edifying too. It’s a universe first, and it happened on Earth. It’s empowering, engrossing. There’s so much to see. With no space left empty, it’s elaborate, exciting, extols energy. With exquisite exhibits and enlightening exposures, it’s the most, enticing, enriching, educational environment, established on Earth. It’s EPIC, the Exceptional Pinterest-Inspired Classroom.

      • robbiesinspiration

        Ah Norah, this is very clever. Well done.

      • Norah

        Thank you, Robbie. <3

      • denmaniacs4

        clever indeed! you’d make a great carny, Norah…

      • Norah

        Thank you. That was the effect I was aiming for. 🙂

      • Molly Stevens - Shallow Reflections

        Terrific flash, Norah. The classrooms of my youth had a banner above the chalk board that displayed the alphabet. I don’t recall any Pinterest worthy exhibits. I do remember thinking it was a lark to be the one to clean the chalkboard at the end of the day. Maybe that’s why I’m a minimalist and love to see bare spaces on my walls. I am also not one to decorate my desk area at work like some do. I work better without distractions so I’m wondering if children do, too!

      • Norah

        Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts both here and over at my blog, Molly. I’m pleased my flash worked. It was more difficult to write than the previous few.
        Like you, I enjoyed cleaning the chalkboard too – enjoyed making clouds of dust. It may have also had something to do with getting rid of all that work we’d done during the day!
        I wouldn’t say I ‘decorate’ my desk, but I have stuff all over it. I wouldn’t win any awards for it though. 🙂

      • Molly Stevens - Shallow Reflections

        Haha! I’m with you on the desk decorations, Norah. A coffee cup, some sticky notes, and a bin of paper clips make for a stunning display!

      • Norah

        Way to go! 🙂

      • D. Avery @shiftnshake

        I almost missed this! And that would have been a shame, this sings off the page.

      • Norah

        Awh. Thank you. 🙂

      • Charli Mills

        Bill is right, Norah — your carny voice comes through clearly on your flash. It sets up the fantastical tone for the EPIC classroom pins.

  3. denmaniacs4

    Door-to-door

    “He’s so young,” I can hear my mother say.

    “He’s fourteen,” my father states the obvious.

    “That’s what I mean. Delivering papers is one thing. People ask to have the paper delivered. They want kids delivering the news. But this?”

    I’ve been delivering the Snuffle River Clarion six days a week for three years. Seventy customers. That’s been my bar. It goes down every so often. People move. A few have died.

    But I ain’t a kid any longer.

    The future is in door-to-door.

    Watkins Products!

    Spices!

    Vegetable Oil Soap, ‘Pure Enough To Eat!’

    Liniment!

    I’ll make a fortune.

    • Charli Mills

      The eternal hope of a salesman captured in the heart of a young teen. That is an epic feeling, Bill.

  4. D. Avery @shiftnshake

    Virtual Reality

    “Jeez, Kid, that post was kinda trippy. Had ta wunder ‘bout Shorty fer a bit there…”
    “Trippy? Have ta wunder ‘bout you, Pal.”
    “It’s a wunder we git anythin’ done aroun’ here what with all the yackin’. Saddle up, Kid, it’s time ta ride.”
    “Pal, do we ride or write? This kin be punny place, I git confused.”
    “Reckon, you an’ me, we ride, jist do ranch-like chores.”
    “Good, writin’s too much work. I’d ruther be herdin’ strays, tendin’ the stock, ridin’ the range… It’s beautiful here.”
    “Yep. We really have an epic workplace, Kid.”
    “I imagin’ we do.”

    https://shiftnshake.wordpress.com/ranch-yarns/

    • Charli Mills

      It is an epic workplace to write and ride in the saddle! Pal and Kid have it good.

    • Norah

      It is an epic writeplace! Great job, Pal and Kid.

    • robbiesinspiration

      They definitely do have an epic workplace.

    • Charli Mills

      Thanks, Reena!

    • kayuk

      Few could live up to that ideal.

      • Reena Saxena

        Agree.

  5. pensitivity101

    Hi Charli. I hope you like my effort this week
    https://pensitivity101.wordpress.com/2018/09/07/september-6-flash-fiction-challenge/

    A sign of the Times.

    Scott loved his job at the Living Museum. It was inspired, and different.
    Admittance was free, but there were warnings about laser lights and flashing images.
    Only fifty people were admitted at any one time, the doors closing behind them.
    The room was dark, save for a single spot of light on the far wall.
    The music started, loud and upbeat. Lights pulsed to the rhythm, and the magic began.
    Holographic figures moved amongst them, through them, so real and yet only a projected image. Patrons felt themselves drawn into a time past, present and future all at once.

    • Charli Mills

      Di, I love this image you portray in your flash. That would be an epic job to lead people through such an experience.

      • pensitivity101

        I wonder if something like that would ever happen, or if it’s already in existence somewhere.

    • susansleggs

      Thanks for the laugh. You hit the nail on the head.

      • syncwithdeep

        Thank u susan

    • Molly Stevens - Shallow Reflections

      This sounds like an epic workplace indeed, except I would forego the feet dangling in cold water and the inevitable ring around the behind. Haha! Very funny.

    • Charli Mills

      Ha, ha! That’s epically funny, Deepa! And yet true…

    • Charli Mills

      You had me at “rock,” Sarah! And it is a beautiful work of art. How inspiring to have help someone reclaim their artistry.

    • Charli Mills

      I always enjoy finding out where the prompt led you. North, this time!

      • the dark netizen

        Thanks so much! 😀

        I love where the prompts take me! 🙂

    • Charli Mills

      Thanks, Abihijit! Using the form helps me put together the collection, and sharing the link here gives us something to read. Thanks!

  6. Frank Hubeny

    Epic Workplace

    Eric was a loner. That’s why he liked people. They were rare like deer or bear in the distance. He took a break from thinning paper company land with brush saw holstered on his back and his head lost in his helmet.

    He saw the hikers coming. One of them asked him if they were still on the Appalachian Trail. “Yes! Keep going. It’s right over there.” The trail wasn’t easy to see.

    Eric wondered why people walked that trail, but he was glad to see them. He was glad he could give someone good directions on their way.

    • H.R.R. Gorman

      One of my goals was to walk the AT – but time gets away from me and I don’t foresee myself accomplishing that one. Love each piece I’ve been on, though!

      • Frank Hubeny

        I love walking trails. I’ve never been near the Appalachian Trail except having worked in the Maine woods when young.

    • Charli Mills

      Frank, this character likes to help people even if he feels he’s a loner. Sounds like a good job for him!

    • Norah

      It does! Love it!

      • Ritu

        ????

    • Charli Mills

      It was astounding, Ritu! I had to laugh at all the other smiling parents I encountered, too. And it begins in an epic place as your flash describes.

      • Ritu

        Love it!

    • Charli Mills

      Thanks, Michael! I love cheese and cheesy thoughts!

      • Michael

        Thanks Charli.

  7. reading journeys

    “I scrolled thru the pics. Ah, what an awesome place to read sci fi, fantasy… Wait! Is that Ms. Mills? And is that an EPIC WISCONSIN RATTLER??? Why does it have that glittering eye?? … I freeze with EPIC HORROR!!”

    Hi Charli,
    Thank you for sharing your experiences!

    Saifun

    • Charli Mills

      Ha, ha! There were so many reading nooks, Epic hidey-holes. I want there to be a Take-Your_Mother-to-Work Day so I could read. And yes, I’d bring my Brandon Sanderson or Robert Jordan. My SIL wanted to play D&D there. Mum on a Rattler and its eye was glittering because Heaven was across the pathway!

  8. Jules

    Charli and All –

    *I’m just glad I got my free write in before the phone rang… *

    Double Wow!! What a cool looking place to work and grow! Best to Runner!

    However, I’ve been up since 6 am. One of those days to get the Grand off to his school. Then I got a call from hubby – We were headed out of Dodge. Not much one can do while riding shot gun for about 8 hours… I might be retiring early – Since we may just be repeating this journey to head home tomorrow.

    But that’s not my Epic journey. It’s just my Hubby’s job to go where the clients have issues.

    So… More hopefully sooner, but maybe a day or two later….

    • Charli Mills

      Hi Jules! Sounds like you had an epic day or two of travel. His job is epic in that he responds to quickly to clients wherever they are. I hope your grandson is off to a great start in school this year. Thank you and best to you and your family!

      • Jules

        Hubby is pretty much on call 24/7 but when he took this job he made sure to stay out of management – he gets paid hourly and overtime. And I get to travel with him sometimes. 🙂

      • Charli Mills

        Sounds like he picked what fits him best! And a fun perk for you, sometimes!

  9. susansleggs

    Charli, My husband is an estimator in big construction, you could see the numbers racking up super quick as he read the description of Runners work place. What an accomplishment! My workplace is a happy messy place…..

    My Peaceful Workspace

    If someone asked where I would like to have an epic quilting space, I would answer, on a bluff overlooking the Oregon coast, or high in a sky scraper with lots of windows to admire the scenery day and night, or perhaps on Flathead Lake in Montana to view the mountains and water. But let’s be logical about this; if I’m sewing I’m not looking at a view. I think I’ll keep the 600 square feet in the basement of my current home. Peace resides there and my cats keep me company. Besides I’m usually working in my pajamas.

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      To work peacefully in one’s pajamas is epic. You’ve got it.

    • kayuk

      Oh!! To have 600 square feet all your own. It must be heavenly/1

    • Molly Stevens - Shallow Reflections

      Working in your pajamas is a dream come true! That’s why I’ve embraced the style of leggings and loose tops. I can go to work and be almost as comfortable as though I was in my PJs. The bra is a bit of a problem….

      • susansleggs

        I think every woman that reads your comment will go, “Yup.”

      • Charli Mills

        Ha, ha! Stuff it in your desk drawer, Molly!

    • Charli Mills

      Sue, your husband might be interested to watch this video about building Epic’s Deep Space: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LF4Ma_tKj10. I bet the numbers add up quickly! And nothing is cut short. What an epic job to have –building these spaces!

      But I like your epic workspace — enough to do what one loves to do!

      • susansleggs

        My hubby kept saying, “Wow,” as he watched the video. thanks for sharing.

  10. Jules

    Charli and All,

    To get to that point to be at a place where you want to be – working or not – that is epic. I like how Dani has gotten to take the ‘Bull by the horns’ 🙂

    I went with fiction in a short sci fi bit…
    (Remember the icon goes to a closed site – if you want to go to the post use the title link – thank you.) Here:

    DracoMage Station

    DracoMage Station

    Would anyone believe me if I had told them my dream to get
    here had started with experiments in astral projection? What
    Mattered now was the height, width and breadth of the
    present gift. And that I was employed by those who
    specialized in making dreams come true.

    Looking out the thick portal of the station, breathing recycled
    air, I thought about every little cubby I had to endure in order
    to be a part of this crew. And at this workstation – an epic
    location out in space. The view from DracoMage to earth
    made my human heart swell.

    ©JP/dh

    I’m not quite in space… but still far from home. Once hubby’s day ends (whenever that ends) we have about 8 hours of travel. So … see you all tomorrow or later in the week.

    • Norah

      Travel safe, Jules. We’ll see you when you get back.

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Glad you projected to the Ranch despite your travels. Take it easy.

      • Jules

        We almost made it back last night… but with onset of darkness, rain, and being just pain tired we pulled in and slept before completing out way home safely. Got us a busy afternoon though so still going to be a bit absent as we settle back into routines.
        ~Thanks, Jules

    • Charli Mills

      What a view this workstation would offer! Safe travels, Jules!

    • Charli Mills

      I can imagine you being in that epic job, too, Rosemary!

    • Charli Mills

      You are having an epic dual career!

  11. tnkerr

    Devil Boat

    I read that she was called “The Devil Boat” in reference to Revelations Chapter 13. We never called her that. The USS HAWKBILL SSN666 was a highly decorated Sturgeon Class Attack Submarine.

    What was most grand about her was the crew.

    Every crewman on a submarine stakes his survival on the skills and knowledge of the rest. This creates a bond. It builds pride in self and in others as, daily, you do more than you ever thought possible.

    It’s a dangerous and cramped workplace. It’s not for everyone. It sometimes stinks. It frustrates. I’d undoubtedly do it again.

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      I know a guy who actively served on a submarine. It is a life shaping experience I’d say. I like how your focus was on the human component.

      • tnkerr

        I have always believed that people are a company’s biggest asset, I also think that the people you work with govern morale. It’s all about the people.

    • kayuk

      I was on one of the Polaris subs once. Invited in by one of the crew while it was docked in Norfolk, VA. It was definitely not designed for tall or big people, and I can see where one would need a pretty calm temperament to serve on one. However, every man on board appeared happy to claim a birth on it.

      • tnkerr

        Polaris boats are pretty big too. And, you’re right you get a sense of belonging, a sense of pride. Sounds kinda stupid, but it’s true. I’m glad you liked the piece.

      • kayuk

        My first husband was on the JFK. Aircraft carriers are a whole different bucket of fish. It’s a floating city. And my dad was on the Kittyhawk, a destroyer, ‘guarding’ the Enterprise back during the Bay of Pigs. He called it a motorized cork, but worked in the boiler room. Among other things, it was his crew’s job to cool the boilers before abandoning ship so they wouldn’t explode and kill everyone. One memory leads to another…so many memories of Navy life.

    • Charli Mills

      Such a great story that captures that sense of service. I love the power of this well place line: “What was most grand about her was the crew.”

  12. Peregrine Arc

    Working on The Unsinkable Ship

    “They’re wanting sheets in cabin four, Miss Elizabeth.”

    “Yes, miss. I’ll get them right away,” the maid said politely with a curtsy to her matron.

    “And be sure you’re minding your place. Just because we’re working in first class doesn’t mean—”

    But Elizabeth was already down the hallway, gathering clean linens in the laundry room. Her friend Gayle was there, in the corner where they whispered their secrets and dreams.

    “Just think of it, Liz! Us—on the Titanic!”


    https://peregrinearc.com/2018/09/08/flash-fiction-epic-work-place/

    It’d be kind of bitter sweet to work on the Titanic and I wouldn’t like the class system and separations. But, it’s still worth pondering, yeah? Such a sad story but it still transfixes a lot of people today, including myself.

    Thanks for reading!

    • Norah

      There were many ‘epics’ connected to that one story.

      • Peregrine Arc

        Thanks for reading. 🙂

    • kayuk

      We look back now and think of the horror as it went down but, before that happened, it was certainly magnificent. And oh, how exciting!

      • Peregrine Arc

        Yes! Thanks for reading.

    • Charli Mills

      A unique take on the prompt and your flash captures what would have bee real excitement and amazement for anyone in the working class to get to go on that voyage. I think Titanic continues to capture our attention because its full of these human stories and struggles.

      • Peregrine Arc

        Yes, I think so, too. That’s a good point. Thanks for reading. 🙂

  13. D. Avery @shiftnshake

    Dream Job

    “I have had a lot of other jobs, but this is by far the best. I mean, it can be intense, but I enjoy the challenge. In my present work I am able to really use and incorporate all my previous experiences and prior knowledge to advantage. And I have a lot of latitude, a lot of freedom. I often work outside, I can dress how I want, set my own hours… it’s pretty awesome. Dream job. I am really enjoying myself.”

    “Uh, Dude, you’re unemployed. You haven’t worked in months.”

    “But I have been working at writing! Epic!”

    • kayuk

      Now THAT’S how to think outside the box!

    • Charli Mills

      One day writing will be considered a j-o-b!

  14. Pete

    “Noah, Noah, Noah…”

    I broke off my thoughts, elbow deep in the murk of dishwater and plotting. Rhonda stared at me over a haphazard pile of pots and dishes, used napkins, trash and utensils. ‘I swear kid, sometimes I wonder where you go in that head of yours. Anyway, this is the last of the buffet.”

    She stalked off to light a smoke. I turned to the load. A three-gallon pot of Clam chowder with a day’s worth of insulation around the lip. I picked up my scraper and smiled. I had all night to get this chapter right…

    • Charli Mills

      All that time to plot — that what dish-washing is all about! I actually have a super clean kitchen because of that, Pete.

  15. oneletterup

    Great workspace Charli! Wow!

    My contribution:

    Works

    “I’m doing my works!”
    The little girl demonstrates.
    Carefully pouring water from cup to bowl.

    The silent visitor watches in surprise.
    She’s never seen such a grand school.

    Small wooden tables and chairs. A low matching sink.
    Sun pouring in on many bright, happy faces.
    The little boy calls out “Me too. Look at my works!”
    Red cubes stacked high.

    A place for important work. For all.
    Pouring. Sorting. Counting. Writing.
    Girls and boys. Older helping younger.
    Just like her.

    The teacher, sitting on the big rug, smiles.
    “Please join us for circle time.”

    “Welcome to Greenwood Montessori school.”

    http://oneletterup.com/2018/09/09/flash-fiction-challenge-epic-workplace

    • kayuk

      I always wondered what Montessori school was like.

    • Charli Mills

      I think such epic workplaces are reflected in the epic ways of teaching children outside the standard limits. I like that your character gets too experience Greenwood Montessori.

  16. robbiesinspiration

    It sounds like Runner has found the perfect job for him which is very fortunate. A great piece of flash fiction too, Charli. Terence and I have been world travelers for the past week so I missed your prompt. I have managed to get it done this week though. We arrived back home this morning. Here it is: https://bakeandwrite.co.za/flashfiction-epic-workplace/

    • Molly Stevens - Shallow Reflections

      This is an epic ‘workplace,’ Robbie. The only challenge with who much flexibility is taking time off!

    • kayuk

      That’s definitely my idea of a perfect job.

    • Charli Mills

      Welcome World Traveler! I hope things are moving forward for you and Terence. Runner worked as a bartender to put himself through college and this is his first job not mixing drinks! Glad you are back.

  17. Sarah Brentyn

    Well. If there ever was an EPIC workplace, that would be it. Wow! That’s amazing.

    I’ve got to catch up on some things here. You wrote a piece for NaNo? So cool! I’ll check that out.

    • Charli Mills

      Sarah, Epic was full of space that would attract writers and readers. I think they should open up their campus as a writers retreat. Yes, I got to write for both NaNoWriMo and NaNoProMo! Thanks!

    • papershots

      🙂

      • anuragbakhshi

        Gracias

    • Charli Mills

      Oh, what to do with a problem like Maria! You slam-dunked this one, Anurag. Watch for Norah Colvin’s Rodeo contest announcement next week — I think you’ll like her topic.

      • anuragbakhshi

        Ha ha ha, thank you so much Charli. Will do 🙂

  18. Annecdotist

    Enjoyed your guide to the Epic campus, an enviable workplace indeed. Glad you had such an enjoyable visit and you’re justifiably proud of your son to have secured a position there. My question is, with such a great place to work, would people want to go home?
    Given your devotion to the hero’s journey story structure, I’m sure you won’t mind that I’ve based my flash on the classical meaning of the word epic in The call, along with a post on fictionalised workplaces:
    Taking our characters to work https://annegoodwin.weebly.com/1/post/2018/09/taking-our-characters-to-work.html

    • Charli Mills

      Anne, I almost think they can get away with beds there and then their workers would be like a human hive. One part I forgot to mention — on the days my son is there (the irony is that he travels a lot for his job) he goes out to one of the courtyards and opens up a game of chess with pieces three feet tall. He says by noon the game is over with multiple people stepping out to move a piece. I hope Epic can bring some of that delight to the healthcare systems they serve.

      Your flash has me laughing!

    • Charli Mills

      Good to see you back with your literary art in hand!

      • papershots

        🙂

  19. tearsofbloodinmyheart

    Here’s my contribution for this week. Sometimes the theme has to it with me for a few days until the story just seems to appear as if by magic.

    He tells everyone he meets about his job and therefore indirectly where he works…..”I’m a Jazz saxophonist” “I’m a web designer” “I’m a Yoga teacher” “….An architect” “…..a maths teacher” “…….the CEO of a huge fashion house”. The list is endless, and as he very rarely meets the same person twice, there is no worry of being ‘caught out’, ‘on the hop’ or whichever emotion can be applied.
    At night he goes home and slips into POD13458 his webliner attached, his data is recharged. He listens to Bach whilst the jobs he does flash into his memory store.

    • kayuk

      Nice, a scifi twist.

    • Charli Mills

      The brain begins to recognize the 99-word constraint as a problem-solver. What you are experiencing is exciting because your brain is recognizing the prompts as the problem to solve. The solution is like magic. But really, it’s science. And what a captivating flash you reached this week.

      • tearsofbloodinmyheart

        Thank you on so many levels Charli. I have a job that drains my brain so I welcome the problem solve with open arms.

      • Charli Mills

        Good to have you here where you can replenish the well. We ask have so much that can drain us, but art…ahhh, it sustains us. Then perhaps we can take that problem solving creativity back to work with us.

    • kayuk

      Ditto to D.Avery! Although one of my best friends considered going into forensics.

      • notyouraveragemomblogweb

        I think it would be fascinating after you became desensitized to it all.

    • Charli Mills

      That’s a good perspective to take, Heather. Often it’s a powerful one for a writer to slip into the skin of someone who does some job difficult for others to contemplate doing.

  20. Ann Edall-Robson

    Epic Workspace
    By Ann Edall-Robson

    The room is pristine to start, but soon takes on a look somewhat chaotic. Books spread out across open spaces where once there were thoughts of organization, and streamlining the hours to make them as productive as possible. Sounds of thunking, banging, clinking as doors open and close revealing needed tools. There are small marred bits of paper, tattered edged recipes, speckled from age and use. No one interrupts in this epic workplace where the tantalizing smells and mouth watering finales meld as one. To do so would jeopardize the anticipation of savouring the memories coming from the kitchen.

    http://www.annedallrobson.com/99-words/epic-workplace

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      This builds to a sensory rich culinary crescendo.

      • Ann Edall-Robson

        It seems to always start out slow and methodical with a game plan, but always ends in a frenzy resulting in the more than one choice of goodness to nibble on.

    • kayuk

      Sounds like my mom’s kitchen….bangs, clinks and clanks, and tantalizing odors. MMMMmmmmm!

      • Ann Edall-Robson

        It’s hub central at our home.

    • Charli Mills

      Bring on the good food! A kitchen can be an epic place indeed, Ann. Especially yours, judging by your luscious cookbooks you’ve penned.

      • Ann Edall-Robson

        Thanks Charli, our whole family likes to cook and especially the recipes that have been passed down through the generations. The next in our From Our Home To Yours Series will soon be available.

      • Charli Mills

        Oh, good to know! I look forward to more cooking with you!

  21. kayuk

    Epic Workspace submission

    Space…the Final Frontier
    by Kayuk

    Words, like hammers, pound into me …again. “Isn’t there ONE SINGLE SPACE in this house I can put my things?”

    Tears beg release. Manly things are piled on sofas, beds, tables, and floors in every room. A year after moving in, I’m still an intruder in a man’s sanctuary.

    The tirade continues but, through patio doors, a shady table and chair await me. Abutting the grass is a lovely pond, with a serene view of ducklings following mama.

    He storms out and, laptop in hand, I sigh and step through the door to a warm breeze and epic workplace.

    https://rantingalong.blog/2018/09/09/99-word-prompt-epic-office/comment-page-1/#comment-17157

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Maybe the mc needs that man like a fish needs a bicycle.

      • kayuk

        Maybe. I like these characters so much I may base a book on them. They were also the characters in my Button story.

      • kayuk

        Perhaps it’s a simple matter of communication …or lack of it.

    • Charli Mills

      It would be hard to have manly stuff dominating the living space, Vickie.

  22. D. Avery @shiftnshake

    Trying this out on you all. Marge wanted her workplace mentioned.

    In the Cards

    The guys had circled their beer coolers for poker night in Ernest’s garage, where it was less humid than the trailer.
    “Marge, I can’t believe you quit being shop foreman to work in this two-bit two bay garage. Left the largest dealership around- state of the art equipment, only working on newer vehicles-”
    “Yeah”, chimed Lloyd. “Epic.”
    “The work here’s actually more interesting, our customers bring us all sorts of mechanical mysteries to be solved. It’s more personal. And I got tired of babysitting.”
    “Oooh, personal! Marge and Ernest up in a tree…”
    “Like I said…”
    “Epic”, Lloyd repeated.

    • Charli Mills

      Marge did well to get out of there. Not so sure Ernest needs to be hanging out with these “boys.” Their lack of maturity comes out clearly!

  23. kayuk

    I agree with Marge, an interesting, challenging job is the best.

    • Charli Mills

      We share a similar schedule, Deborah! 😉 I wouldn’t think Jane would get so lucky as to work an epic job but after all, she’s been through, it must feel epic to have some relief. Put your story in the form and I’ll get it in the collection!

  24. kayuk

    LOL!! That is the one place I would never have considered ‘epic workplace’. I’ll have to try it.

  25. Charli Mills

    A grimy place to work, but epic for a superhero.

  26. kayuk

    I’m wondering…How did the family take the move?

  27. kayuk

    What an interesting cheese shop. I think there’s an expanded story there. I want to hear more about the Transylvanian Blue Vein and what happens if it gets out of its sealed cabinet.

  28. kayuk

    Great play on words. My grandmother used to get her story twisted. Sometimes it was hilarious, others it could really get a person in trouble.

  29. Charli Mills

    My murds get wuddled in my husband’s ears all the time!

  30. kayuk

    My teacher friend says that one student who pays attention and gets something out of her class is worth working with shortages in her school system and putting in extra hours. It’s the light that goes forward.

  31. Charli Mills

    Thanks, Chelsea!

  32. Charli Mills

    Thanks, Joelle!

  33. Charli Mills

    Clever play on the word “space” Vickie!

  34. kayuk

    Bwahahahaha! What a set-up for the last paragraph!

  35. Charli Mills

    The power of the blank canvas.

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