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Rodeo #5: Sound and Fury

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A Flash Fiction contest by D. Avery
Co Judges: Bonnie Sheila and the Amazing Educator

THE CONTEST

Sometimes fear, respect, and awe are the braids of one rope. Sometimes that one rope is all a buckaroo has to hang onto. Your flash should never let go of that rope.

Think of a dangerous situation that people willingly engage in. It need not be heroic with a heroic outcome for it is ill-advised to sit down on a bull or to run with them charging down the same narrow street. But people do. Why? Explore the motivation for the character; how did they come to be in this situation?

A high scoring bull rider stays on an athletic bucking spinning bull for eight seconds after exploding out of the chute. They are dance partners, with a grace that is gritty and brutal. The rider holds that braided rope for dear life, knowing the only thing worse than being on a bull’s back is to be at its mercy on the ground. The fascination with danger or the tension of being in a dangerous situation should permeate your story.

A high scoring writer will maximize that eternal eight seconds, letting the reader know what that dangerous situation smelled like, tasted like, sounded like, felt like, looked like. Put the reader on that bull’s back. Give the reader the sound and the fury of a dangerous situation.

These tracks from Marty Stuart’s Way Out West album may set the tone for this prompt. Enjoy and have a good ride.

The rules:

  1. Every entry must be 99 words, no more, no less. You can have a title outside that limit.
  2. Write a story that shows the sound and the fury of an intense and dangerous situation that the main character willingly chose.
  3. There are two dance partners; show the fury of the danger, be it a bucking bull or some other dangerous liaison.
  4. The sound; use sensory details to put the reader in the main character’s dance shoes.
  5. Bonus points for revealing the character’s motivation/fascination for dancing with danger.
  6. Use the form provided below to enter (open this post if you are reading it in an email). If you do not receive a confirmation email, notify wordsforpeople@gmail.com.
  7. Entries must be received by November 7, 2018, at 11:59 p.m. (EST). Contest winner, second and third place entries announced here December 14, 2018
  8. Go where the prompt leads.
  9. Have fun.

For word count, use Microsoft Word or wordcounter.net. Be aware that punctuation and word-hyphens can change your word count so run it through one of those two counters.

Judges for this event are D. Avery, Bonnie Sheila, and the Amazing Educator.

D. Avery, Rough Writer spinner of Ranch Yarns, shares prose and poetry at ShiftnShake. She has published two books of poetry, Chicken Shift and For the Girls. Her third book, After Ever, little stories for grown children, is evidence of her shift to fiction writing. You might find her funny, except when she’s serious, but you can certainly find her at Twitter and Amazon.

Bonnie Sheila is a crafty woman who lives by the sea and who has taken up quilling to keep herself off the streets. Her art can be viewed at Crescents and Coils. She has many talents, but fishing is not one of them.

The Amazing Educator has fiercely and fearlessly championed children for thirty years. Hundreds of people read, write, and even spell well because of her. She is a voracious reader and fearless leader of book groups who has also worked as an editor. When tooling about in her Jeep, Dog is her copilot.

In judging we will apply the following criteria:

  1. Word count: 99
  2. Use of the prompt.
  3. Dance moves; there is a respect and grace between the danger and the endangered.
  4. Imagery; a compelling use of sensory details makes the reader feel the music behind the dance, illustrates the fascination with the danger.
  5. The story brings understanding as to why a person would engage in a high-risk situation.

Thank you for entering! The contest is now closed. Winners announced December 14, 2018, at Carrot Ranch.


78 Comments

  1. Charli Mills says:

    Just in time for Halloween — a dangerous flash fiction! Sound is a great sense to explore in writing. Good luck to everyone who writes to the sound and fury of this final contest in the Rodeo!

    Liked by 3 people

  2. It surely sounds fun, Charli. I’ll be ready to give you the update my the sponsor ad. Both the paperback and Kindle will be available on Amazon in less than 72 hours!

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  3. Annecdotist says:

    On Sunday, I ate my lunch in a tiny pocket of sunshine in the market square watching people on a crazy fairground ride which swung back and forth gathering momentum until it circled around to turn them upside down. No way can I understand that motivation. Then I went to sing Mozart which is scary enough for me!
    So tricky challenge this one! I’ll definitely give it a try and look forward to reading the genuine contenders for the prize.

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  4. calmkate says:

    whoah .. what a fascinating diversity of challenges you offer … but can I stay on that jolly bucking bulls back!

    Liked by 3 people

  5. “I ain’t never been one ta choose danger, Kid. Had realizations after the fact, been reminded thet danger and death are possibilities.”

    “I’d say least one of those is a certain outcome, Pal, jist mind yer timin’ is all.”

    “Zactly. But really, I don’t live dangerously. Wundered if D. Avery’d even let us out this round.”

    “Pal, we don’t give her no choice, do we? Reckon she’s ever been reckless?”

    “Yep, an’ she might be thinkin’ on makin’ another dumb dangerous move, switchin’ careers.”

    “How’s thet dangerous?”

    “Worried she might starve.”

    “Ha! Seen her lately? She’ll last a while.”

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  6. Reblogged this on ShiftnShake and commented:
    Here it is, the final Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Rodeo contest. Check it out and ride. Also, the Bonus Rodeo: Old Time Radio continues. Air your talent!

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Jules says:

    Here’s my ad for this ride (title is link to post):
    Slam, Bam, Thank You Ma’am!

    Ever just get the nervous sweats having to take an exam?
    The proctor slams that little blue book down on each and
    every desk with a stern warning that you can’t flip it until
    he rings his little bell. And your eyes they better not wander
    from your desk space.

    Well this is the final Rodeo folks. Y’all need to hang tight
    onto your braided rope of fear, respect and awe!
    Awe shucks… it ain’t all that bad.

    Y’all have to scratch out what a dangerous situation smells,
    tastes, sounds, feels and looks like. That’s your bull to ride!

    ©JP/dh

    Good Luck all! Yee Haw!

    Liked by 7 people

  8. Liz H says:

    Wow! That intro blog is one tough act to follow. 😮
    But follow we will, if only for a few glorious seconds–because it’s the thrill of the ride & the chance in getting upon that bull in the first place!

    Liked by 4 people

  9. Norah says:

    What a scary contest. Danger lurks in every word. We bare our souls and hope we find acceptance. It’s not always easy. The pen is mightier than the sword.

    Liked by 2 people

  10. Norah says:

    Reblogged this on Norah Colvin and commented:
    The last of the Rodeo contests is on and I think it’s the scariest of all. Write about danger, she says; dance it, feel it, hear it, smell it, touch it, taste it. I’d really rather stay where I’m safe and warm, but perhaps I can give it a go. It is just a story after all. Are you ready to unleash a dangerous story?

    Liked by 2 people

  11. […] Sound and Fury by D. Avery asks you to write a story that shows the sound and the fury of an intense and dangerous situation that the main character willingly chose. Closes Nov. 7 at 11:59 p.m. Top prize $25. […]

    Liked by 1 person

  12. […] If you want to participate, here’s the link:  https://carrotranch.com/2018/10/31/rodeo-and-sound-fury/ […]

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  13. This one sounds like a lot of fun. I will make sure I get my entry in on time.

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  14. Hi D.
    My entry is in!
    I wrote it for the sheer challenge of how to write a believable “danger” story.
    I had a few ideas for an endangered person and the danger, but somewhere along the way, the danger also became the endangered!

    What helped me to put a “picture” together:

    Your intro, and that incredible second video of Marty Stuart — the band’s “dramatization”!

    And also a very fascinating anthology – “Poetry of the American West” — ed. by Alison Hawthorne Deming.

    And very important: Charli’s blogs on tenacity and writing. Thank you!

    Liked by 3 people

  15. I’ve entered. Boy that one was difficult.

    Liked by 2 people

  16. Whoa…what a ride…what a dance, D!!! Listening to the music, fired up as I type this. Fantastic contest…gotta do it, hope I can…like Arnie, ahh’ll be back… 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

  17. Sliding in by the seat of my pants as usual…but really struggled with this. Sure I’m way off the mark…couldn’t quite get there…but hope you enjoy anyway…thanks again, D, forma great contest, looking forward to reading the entries!

    Liked by 1 person

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