October 1: Flash Fiction Challenge

Written by Charli Mills

Charli Mills, a born buckaroo, makes literary art accessible at CarrotRanch.com. She writes about the veteran spouse experience and women forgotten to history.

October 2, 2020

The first full moon of the month rises — the Harvest Moon. Yet my garden joyfully continues to bloom with French marigolds, zinnias, snapdragons, and a fall profusion of nasturtium. My tea rose put out one more scarlet red bloom, and my delphinium surprised me with a third unfolding of purple flowers! My sweet william gave a half-hearted go at it, too, and my peony bushes turned russet like the maple trees. Two lemon queens out of nine yet stand, dropping their heads downward. I can’t seem to eat enough rosemary, picking its freshness in the crisp air daily.

If this is the Harvest Moon, then time to dig the last of the carrots, potatoes and claim my squash.

Further up Quincy Hill from Roberts Street, the copper-bearing ridge that forms the spine of the Keweenaw Peninsula has experienced harder frosts. At the kids’ homestead, they harvested 250 pounds or rosy red potatoes and enough butternut to last all winter. My SIL built a cold storage un their cellar to store it all. We anticipate a hog raised by friends along the Chequomegan Bay side of Lake Superior to fill our two freezers. Winter is coming, and I heard rumor of snow mixed with today’s rain up higher. An inch is coming, they say. The first snow.

Across Roberts Street, a neighbor’s maple blazes so brightly it’s practically neon orange. I love the transformative feel of this season. And we have reached a transformation at Carrot Ranch, too! Today, under the light of the first full moon, we officially launch the Rodeo Season!

Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Rodeos are intended to be an opportunity for the greater writing community to hone and highlight their craft skills. It’s also a fun time to offer something different from the weekly challenges. However, like snow and autumn leaves still on the branches, both will happen simultaneously. We will have a series of Rodeo Contests and weekly challenges. By the time NaNoWriMo starts, you will be full of seeds to harvest into a longer work, if that’s your intent. A few of you might walk away with a swagger and $25 cash. All of you will have had an unexpected experience because I predict, you have no idea what these Rodeo Leaders have in store for you!

Most,ly, I hope you have fun and stretch yourselves as writers. Be brave. Be compassionate, yourself included. No one ever said literary art was easy. But I promise you — it is worth your effort! You get to develop your voice, express imagination and expand your creativity. All among a community.

Speaking of stretching, I’m stretched thin. It’s just a season. An MFA season. I appreciate all the support and understanding and know that I greatly value the community at Carrot Ranch. My reason for existing as an author is to be the kind of literary citizen who engaged my mind and heart and imagination over the years. Sure, I could go away and write, but the silence would be defining. My voice would weaken, and I would miss yours. I’m in this with other writers, and I’m committed to making literary art a light in dark times. I’m dedicated to finding my best expression to give voice to women on the fringes and frontiers. I want to help you be your literary best for whatever purpose you have.

So, let’s get this rodeo started!

Bull riding runs in my family. My great-grandfather rode bulls, my grandfather did, and so did my dad. I never rode a full-grown bull, but I did take down a billy goat in the same rodeo arena where my kin-buckaroos made eight-second rides. Here’s the thing to keep in mind with eight seconds. It’s a lot like a fast 99-word draft. You can’t write at that speed and stay in the saddle without some skill. I think everyone is capable of making a go. In fact, I have held literary outreach, where I make attendees write 99 words in five minutes. When someone says impossible, I just tell them time is ticking. Most achieve it. But some clearly make a brilliant ride in eight seconds.

That’s how TUFF begins. TUFF stands for The Ultimate Flash Fiction. We’ve been discussing it at the Saloon and over at D.’s ShiftnShake, where she schools us on the tool and craft. You take all your craft skills and hit the keys like you were riding a bull for eight seconds. Some call it the “hot pen” method of writing when you press the ink to the paper and don’t let up for the duration. Every writer needs to grow comfortable with drafting. It’s a vital part of art where the brain editor is told to sit down in the stands, shut up, and watch the ride. Like bull riders, some writers are addicted to the rush of drafting.

Ah, yes. And that’s why what follows next is revision. TUFF takes a writer from a fast draft to a reduction in words, forcing the writer to cut and think and get creative with editing (yes, that stuffy old brain editor can be creative, too). In the end, the writer gets to rebuild that draft. The final polished story should look, read, and feel different from that first wild write. TUFF judges are looking for the courage to submit a fast draft, the ability to revise through reduction, and will expect a polished and transformed final story.

TUFF takes place on MONDAYS here at the Ranch at the Saddle Up Saloon. Kid and Pal are taking a trail ride to enjoy the fall foliage and beans over a campfire. I’ll be hosting TUFF every Monday — October 5, 12, 19, and 26. It’s a progressive contest, and all four parts will be turned in the last week of the Rodeo.

And expect western themes throughout October!

It’s my delight to introduce you to our esteemed 2020 Rodeo Leaders who all agreed that the Rodeo would be held out in the Wild, Wild West. Each leader will host their contest on their home turf and Carrot Ranch will reblog their contest post here so you can easily find where to go next. Rodeo contests will release every TUESDAY while our Ranch Columnists take a break with Kid and Pal.

WELCOME TO THE SHOW! (We’ll let Houston get us pumped up for the 2020 Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Rodeo):

First out of the gate, writing speculative fiction from a fog-enshrined river and overstuffed little house, Kerry E.B. Black! Join her at the Allusionary Assembly on Tuesday, October 6 to have fun with folklore and fables, a staple of storytelling around campfires.

Next up, inventing new forms from the West, Prose-Metrist, Novelist, & Word Witch, Colleen Chesebro has a challenge unlike any other. She created a double ennead syllabic poetry form for the Ranch! If it sounds complicated, hold onto your hats, buckaroos — you’ll be learning the ropes as Colleen puts you through the paces on Tuesday, October 13.

That’s not all, folks! We have Marsha Ingrao, a teacher and educational consultant of twenty-five years, to git us movin’ along. She’s inspired the little doggies from the 2020 Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction Rodeo Playlist. You can learn more at her Always Write blog to start writin’ Monday, October 20.

Finally, wrapping up the contest entries is a treasure of a flash fiction writer by night and paper pusher by day, Sam “Goldie”  Kirk. Goldie combine a photo and phrase prompt, so don’t miss your last chance to enter the Rodeo on Tuesday, October 27. We will end on a golden note!

I want to thank our Leaders for stepping up to develop and host a contest on their blog. Kerry, Colleen, Marsha, and Goldie have shared their enthusiasm and creativity to bring you all a fun and challenging Flash Fiction Rodeo. I greatly appreciate their willingness to collaborate. Each will have their own set of rules and criteria to guide their hand-picked judges. You will find out more as each contest unfolds. Pay close attention to the rules and turn in your best work.

There are no fees to enter. You may enter one submission per contest. Judges will pick one winner in each contest for a $25 top prize (announcement dates vary between contests). The top entries will be be published on a permanent page at Carrot Ranch under the 2020 Rodeo Collection and we ask that you refrain from posting your entry on your blog or in social media until after the judging period (we judge entries blind).

In the meantime, challenges continue. Encourage each other in the comments, welcome new writers, and try to visit three sites to share the blog-love. Thank you for a fabulous community!

October 1, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that happens on the dusty trail. It can take place anywhere. Who is your character, where are they going, and why? Bonus points if they meet up with Kid and Pal from D. Avery’s Ranch Yarns and Saddle Up Saloon (they hit the trail so TUFF could take over the saloon). Go where the prompt leads!

Respond by October 6, 2020. Use the comment section below to share, read, and be social. You may leave a link, pingback, or story in the comments. If you want to be published in the weekly collection, please use the form.  Rules & Guidelines.

Submissions are now closed. See our latest challenge to enter.

Outlaws on the Dusty Trail by Charli Mills

Frankie wiped her glass eye with the scarf she used to cover her face.

“Gotta mask up, Bert,” she told her horse (who wasn’t listening). “Dang dust.”

The dry storm blew like a devil whirling across the flats. Ahead, Frankie made out the outline of riders that looked to her one eye like two outlaws. They were wearin’ masks, too! She tightened the rains and thought about lunging old Bert to keep the mail safe (Bert had no run left in him).

“Hey, it’s Frankie.”

Blowing dust and relief, she realized it were jist her friends, Kid and Pal.

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  1. Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist)

    As I know zilch about the wild West, I might just be watching this from the sidelines. Although I have read a few novels set there … In fact, your intriguing flash reminds me of Inland … I love how you pull the reader in with that reference to the glass eye. Which also pops up in We Need to Talk about Kevin which isn’t set in the wild west. Apologies, I’m rambling again. Going to be a busy month.

    • joanne the geek

      Yes I agree. Western isn’t a genre I know that well. I may take a break from it.

      • Sam "Goldie" Kirk

        What IS your fav genre? Maybe you can put a twist on the Western?

      • Charli Mills

        The prompts are themes — all genres welcome, Joanne.

      • H.R.R. Gorman

        I know NZ isn’t Australia, but there is a subgenre of western about Australia. Instead of cattle, it’s sheep, and instead of Indians, it’s Aboriginals. “The Man from Snowy River” is probably my favorite of that subgenre.

      • Charli Mills

        The Man from Snowy River is a classic! And it was based on an epic poem, too.

    • Sam "Goldie" Kirk

      I’m sure you have some preconceived notions of the Wild, Wild West. I’d love to see your ideas. Step out of the comfort zone.

      • Charli Mills

        Well said, Goldie! The Rodeo is offered to stretch writers — and stepping out of one’s comfort zone is an opportunity to push creativity in unexpected ways.

      • Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist)

        More a lack of ideas … oh, but one’s just come in the course of this reply!!!

      • Sam "Goldie" Kirk

        Glad to serve as inspiration 😉 Stay golden!

    • Liz H

      I’m the same.
      But I note that the prompt just says dusty trail and that it can take place anywhere…
      I’m counting on that to unsnap my block from all I don’t know…

      • Charli Mills

        Yes! I was intending to see where writers from around the world would take the themes. One of my favorite screenplay examples of a western sci-fi is Firefly. The “dusty trail” was often star dust.

      • Liz H

        That’s a western? I’d heard about this show from my son!

      • Charli Mills

        It is a space western! Even the original Star Wars has elements of western genre. And in the reverse, westerns have elements of other genres or older folklore or regional nostalgia.

      • Liz H

        Gonna have to get this from the library, for long, snowy nights. Woot!

      • H.R.R. Gorman


      • Liz H

        ???????? okay, already!

      • Charli Mills

        Ha, ha! Liz, you got a secondary endorsement! H., all-caps got me feeling like I wanted to watch it again!

      • Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist)

        I think I can do ‘dusty trail’ although haven’t yet. It was more the contests.

    • Charli Mills

      Anne, it’s okay to know zilch about the wild west. That will make your responses to the themes all the more interesting. Think of other literary works or places and spark something different in response. Go where the prompt leads…it’s not bound by place, genre or a singular interpretation.

      Yep. Going to be busy. But there is a purpose and Goldie nailed it — to get writers out of their comfort zones.

      • Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist)

        Thanks, Charli, I realise that, as ever, it’s open to multiple interpretations. But as for stepping out of my comfort zone, life’s like paddling through a pool of pus right now, wondering if I ever had one. But my dusty trail is ready and I even got an idea for the TUFF where I might challenge the system more than myself.

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      You and yours have been frequent fliers t the Saddle Up Saloon, and if that ain’t wild west…

      • Charli Mills

        I hear even New England has elements of the wild west.

  2. denmaniacs4

    Desert Serenade

    Took me a little ride away from the ranch, y’know, to get my spurs spinnin’ properly.

    Met Kid and Pal as I headed out on Flossy. They said, ‘That nag’ll go faster backwards than the way you’re headin’.”

    Me, I was in no hurry anyhow.

    When your hearts busted, the night desert’s a sad and comfortin’ place at any speed.

    Makes ya wanta sing…

    “Love ain’t nothin’ but a broken-down tractor
    And love ain’t nothin’ but an out a work actor
    Love ain’t nothin’ but a lost holy grail,
    And you’ll never find it on an old dusty trail.”

    • Liz H

      I think that song deserves a Youtube recording and a link to the Ranch…

    • Charli Mills

      A mournful tune echoing across the dust motes reached the ears of Kid and Pal.

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Them spurs is spinnin’ proper now! Thet’s a fine song yer singin’.

    • Jules

      Ooh… you’ve given me some things here to think on.
      Always a hoot listening to the country station when we travel and can’t get anything else on the radio!

  3. Sherri Matthews

    Glorious season of the Harvest Moon! Exciting month ahead, and I need to listen to your Youtube list, Charli. Time to saddle up and ride and write like the wind! <3

    • Charli Mills

      I hope you enjoy the Rodeo, Sherri! On the playlist, listen to Kassi Valazza. I think her music will strike a chord. Go write like Mariah! <3

      • Sherri Matthews

        I will, exciting…thanks, Charli! <3

  4. Colleen M. Chesebro

    Woo HOO! Round ’em up, boys! I’m ready to rodeo!! This is going to be so much fun! <3

    • Charli Mills

      It’ll be a stampede of fun, wrangling those 99 syllables! <3

  5. Colleen M. Chesebro

    Reblogged this on Word Craft ~ Prose & Poetry and commented:
    Charli Mills from Carrot Ranch supplies this week’s flash fiction challenge, along with the low-down on the rodeo and what you can expect from the contests! NO FEES and $25 prizes for the winner! Have a read! Giddy UP!

    • Charli Mills

      Riding along with ya, Colleen!

  6. Sam "Goldie" Kirk

    OK, Boys and Girls! Get ready for a whirlwind! Lassos ready? Yeehaw! This is so exciting!

    • Charli Mills

      This way, something whirls!

  7. TanGental

    Morgan is suffering for his art today…

    ‘Where did you get to, Morgan?’
    ‘Those two reprobates
    , Kid and Pal…’
    ‘You went drinking with them? Give me you wallet.’
    ‘I didn’t spend much.’
    ‘It’s not the money; I’m tearing up your donor card. You can’t expect anyone to want your organs now.’
    ‘I think I must have dropped my brain and bruised it. Did I disturb you?’
    ‘How kind of you to worry. As it happens, no, though you did leave a sad trail of shed clothes, keys, burger wrappers…’
    ‘Sorry, I was feeling a little dusty…’
    ‘Yeah, I get it. They’re hard to refuse, aren’t they?’

    But we’re all looking forward to seeing if childhood years of watching Bonanza, High Chapperral, Casey Jones, The Lone Ranger and umpteen Clint Eastwood silent movies pays off…

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      I may need to come back with the real story. Morgan is throwing blame in the wrong direction! In the mean time, preserve the donor card, as those organs are well preserved; pickled, even.

      • TanGental

        He’s not the most reliable of narrators….

    • H.R.R. Gorman

      Bonanza’s my favorite. You probably don’t care, but Little Joe was hot as hell.

      • TanGental

        Yep, missed that one. I save my bromance for Joe Wicks

      • D. Avery @shiftnshake

        And then was Pa on the TV version of Little House on the Prairie, right? He aged well too.

      • H.R.R. Gorman

        Yup – Michael Landon.

      • Charli Mills

        The appeal of Michael Landon was his goodness wrapped up in cowboy or pioneer.

      • H.R.R. Gorman

        Oh yes. He was very appealing. I liked Dan Blocker’s “Hoss” character better from a personality point of view (the Hoss episodes were my favorite), but the Little Joe ones were also good. Adam has grown on me as I get older because I realize Pernell Roberts was actually a good person who tried to get real people of color to play characters of color.

    • Charli Mills

      Inventive use of the dusty trail and the boys caught up with Kid and Pal. All be darned — you just made me realize that Clint Eastwood spaghetti westerns were silent movies! I was so enthralled with the music (and the dust).

      • TanGental

        Oh that dust… you felt gritty just watching

  8. Liz H

    All right, here’s my tale of a suburban gal far out of her comfort zone. Will there be a happy ending? You get to decide, if you got nuthin’ better ta do…

    Too Far From Home

    She’d worn new Oboz hikers and thin wool socks, afraid of snakes on the trail since there’d been none on the plane. She’d strapped on a hip belt with double water holsters, and a chin-strapped billed cap with cape to for sun protection.

    She gleamed like a beached whale, from all the sunscreen applied, and wore layers, like multiple skins, to transform from wallowing walrus to near naked nymphette, as the weather deemed. She’d traveled far, with no plans to stay out after dark.

    But then she lost the trail, and found two Carrot cowpokes singing by a fire.

    • Doug Jacquier

      Brilliant. Love it 🙂

      • Liz H

        Thanks, Doug!

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Oh, I dunno, mebbe she done found the trail, got onta the right path like.

      Yep, reckon she kin jist set by the fire an’ join in the singin’.

      • Liz H

        She brought her own spoon. Can she hev a scoop a them thar beanz?

      • Liz H


    • Charli Mills

      Sharing beans definitely requires masks later! I love the description of this character and what she wears into the desert. Double water holsters! Good one Liz.

      • Liz H


    • Jules

      Nice tie in to the ranch… I hope they had them some s’mores!

      • Liz H

        Beans first, s’mores fer later!

  9. D. Avery @shiftnshake

    In Which One Doesn’t Fly East, The Other Goes A Little Farther West

    “Jeez, Pal, I’m ready fer a vacation. Where we gonna go, anyway?”
    “We? This is vacation, Kid. My vacation is gonna be time away from you.”
    “What? Yer leavin’ me?”
    “Fer a bit Kid. I’m jist gonna have some quiet time. Mebbe do some fishin’. Catch up with ma cuzzins. Ash and Dusty. Trales.”
    “Ya never told me ya had cuzzins.”
    “Ya never asked. They run a little farm jist west a the ranch. Raise turnip. At one time they figgered ta give Shorty a run fer her money.”
    “Did they?”
    “Nah. Turnips is too bitter.”
    “Kin relate, Pal.”
    “Don’t be bitter, Kid. Whyn’t ya use this time ta go back east? Check out thet fall foliage they talk about.”
    “Too far.”
    “How kin thet be? Ya got here from there didn’tcha?”
    “Mean I’ve come too far. I ain’t goin’ back ta where you know who lives. Reckon I’ll jist spen’ my time up in the Poet Tree. Have ma own quiet time. I’d git homesick if I lef’ the Ranch. Asides it’s cold there.

    *Crimson foliage
    Conflagrant hues crackling
    Ignites morning frost

    Campfire memories burning
    Dusty trails of smoke drift west*

    Yep, I’ll stay here, tanka anyways.”

    • Charli Mills

      Oh, the cuzzins! Ash and Dusty Trales. Kid is welcome to stay at the Ranch. Plenty of dusty trails to explore. But ah, to see the crimson foliage!

    • Jules

      Fun names… and Tanka for the memories…
      I wunner iffin Roy and Dale might spirit on by?

    • Hugh W. Roberts

      Haha. I especially love the ending of your piece of flash fiction.

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Hey Pal, ain’t that Jess an’ Cindy, them farmers we had visit us at the Saddle Up Saloon a while back?

      Sure is. Bet they’s admirin’ the carrots.

      Prob’ly. They seem ta dig carrots.

    • Charli Mills

      Yeehaw! You pushed on through to the dusty trail! Or, rather, broke down. But in a good place.

    • Jules

      Some times the whole of anything is jist waitin’ for that last line!
      Fun! ????

  10. Hugh W. Roberts

    Time to get my cowboy hat out! Wishing everyone good luck with the upcoming contests. I’ll certainly be giving my creative cogs a whirl in trying to come up with entries. It all sounds like great fun.

    • Charli Mills

      Yes, Hugh, cowboy hat, time! Soon you’ll be roping and riding!

  11. Jules

    Charli –
    October’s gonna be a busy month! I liked how you got Kid and Pal in there.
    I didn’t quite manage the extra points, but I’ve got a new poetic form for you and added two prompts to boot!…Which can be found on my site…
    … Dreams have their own trails!

    Looking for the Comfort of Autumn…
    (two verses of a Vers Beaucoup)

    There’s a strain on the prairie plane – no hill or dale, putting a strain
    On this traveler’s brain – dry ground, no trained hound
    On a lead bound to find any water for this daughter
    Who oughter have stayed close to home, but did roam

    Running from the season, with no rhyme or reason, spirit to be pleasin’
    Yet the nose is just sneezin’ – no thirst quenched, arid dry air first
    In spiral clouds burst from the not so shy, dust filled sky
    The trail far from the shade of the leaves of willow for my pillow…


    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      You payin’ attenchun, Kid? The Poet Lariat is showin’ ya some fancy twirlin’ right there.


      Bless ya Kid.

      • Jules

        Oooh… thanks Pal and Kidd – I wonder iffin’ Charli’d give me points for your inclusion… T’ain’t nothin’ to sneeze at, at’tall!


      • Charli Mills

        Ha, ha! I think you roped in Kid and Pal, Jules for some bonus points.

    • Charli Mills

      Merci beaucoup, Poet Lariat! That’s some nice internal rhyme you got going on in 99 words. I think you are going to enjoy Colleen’s syllabic contest.

      • Jules

        Had ta re-toss the lariat a few times to wrangle them to 99! 🙂

  12. Doug Jacquier

    All along the ridgetop (with apologies to His Bobness; sing along for best effect))

    “This is kind of way out there,”
    said Charli through gritty teeth.
    “There’s too much confusion
    I can’t even see you, Keith.”
    “No reason to get excited,”
    That Keith, he kindly spoke.
    “I’m still here among us
    The same old cowpoke.
    You and I, we’ll get though this,
    this is not our fate.
    Take you false teeth out now.
    The hour’s getting late.”
    All along the ridgetop
    coyotes kept the view
    sagebrush it came and went
    but not a kangaroo.
    Outside in the cold distance
    A wild cat did growl
    Two riders were approaching
    It was Kid and Pal.

    • Liz H

      Channeling a little Dylan…cool!

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Kid! Take yer hat off!

      Ow! What fer?

      Fer the love a Dylan, an’ hats off ta Doug fer thet there response.

    • Charli Mills

      Even extra bonus points for also including Saddle Up Saloon karaoke! Might fine, Doug.

    • Jules

      Sat under the Poet Tree didja? Nice!

  13. reading journeys

    Hi Charli – a great blog & the Western theme got me thinking of some classic authors like Zane Gray and Louis Lamour…

    This ain’t poetry
    Jist ramblin’ thoughts & ideas
    Dunno if I can write a Western story.
    Readin’ the FF & poetry from the Carrot Ranch writers
    And listenin’ to some great guitar music
    And I thought of Kid up in the Poet Tree
    Time to read again
    That mighty powerful anthology “Poetry of the American West”*
    Windin’ down the trail from the 16th century to modern times
    I could get lost in my imagination just in the titles
    “Nahuatl” & “Song of the Sky Loom”
    “Cow Boy’s Lament” & “Educated Feller”
    “El Corrido de Gregario Cortez”
    “Piute Creek” and “I went into the Maverick Bar”
    “Sonata for the Invisible” …

    I think I’ll head up the trail into the mountains for a spell.


    “Poetry of the American West”* ed by Alison Hawthorne Deming*

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Dang it, Pal.

      Whut now, Kid?

      Thinkin’ my TBR pile jist grew agin.

      Yep, yer in titled.

    • Charli Mills

      Saifun, I appreciate that your strong reader roots are showing. I looked up that volume and my heart shifted my TBR pile! Thinkin’ I’m going to need to send one to Kid and Pal. Enjoy your mountain trail time!

      • reading journeys

        You are welcome! My edition is rather dated -1996. There’s more poetry by some of the modern poets online at poets.org — Academy of American Poets. Enjoy!

  14. Sam "Goldie" Kirk

    Reblogged this on One day at a time… and commented:
    October is Rodeo month at Carrot Ranch.
    If you are not familiar, I suggest you head on over to Charli’s site and find out more. If you are a veteran – what are you waiting for? Make your way to the Carrot Ranch for more details on this year’s trials.

    Starting October 6th, every Tuesday, a different person will post a Western related prompt for your 99-words (or syllables) flash fiction (or poem).

    Yours truly will host a challenge on October 27th. You will have a week to submit your entries. Judging will be done by a third party to avoid bias. One winner will be chosen and awarded $25.

    Keep your eyes peeled for my contest, but head on over to the Carrot Ranch to keep busy in the meantime with other prompts. (You can enter all four contests to maximize your chance for winning. Each contest will have a $25 reward for the winner.)


    Stay golden,


    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Ok Kid, reckon we kin hep out fer a bit. Uh oh. Is that Morgan just walked in?

      Yep. Looks thirsty too, like he’s been ridin a dusty trail.

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Awkward… somehow the response intended for Susan ended up here. Hmmm…

    • Charli Mills

      You are rounding up the enthusiasm, gonna have all the cowpokes ready for your last ride!

  15. suespitulnik

    Hi Charli,
    Your vegetable harvest sounds mighty fine, as does the challenge of the rodeo. We are headed to the northern sector of the Thousand Islands this week to leaf gaze and regroup. I’m sure we’ll see a few dusty roads on our way.
    I apologize and seek forgiveness from D. Avery for making Kid and Pal my main characters this week. It took me forever to get the story to work the way I wanted…

    Taking Control

    Katie’s eyes went wide when she saw Kid and Pal standing at the No Thanks bar. “Howdy guys. What brings you here, and, how’d you get so dusty?”
    “We’re on hiatus from our Saloon and gettin’ pulled every which way. One writer’s got us drinkin’, one ridin’ the range and another sittin’ at a campfire, so we rode over for a busman’s holiday. Sorry ’bout the dust.”
    “Don’t care ’bout the dirt. Couldn’t be better timing! If you’ll tend bar, I’ll go see my students dance at the Irish Festival.”
    “We’d love to.”
    “Can’t thank you enough.”
    “Have fun.”

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Ok Kid, reckon we kin hep out fer a bit. Uh oh. Is that Morgan just walked in?

      Yep. Looks thirsty too, like he’s been ridin a dusty trail.

    • Jules

      Fun read. And puttin’ Pal and Kidd behind any bar can be a good thing, right?!

    • Charli Mills

      Shoulda known these two characters were gonna be up to meeting folks on the trail but I didn’t know they’d be poppin’ up in others’ heads! Have a wonderful time leaf-gazing! Oh, I love the true colors of fall! And you live in such a beautiful part of the country for it.

    • Charli Mills

      Thanks, D.!

  16. Norah

    Enjoy your autumn, Charli. It sounds almost magical.
    What a busy month October will be and what a great set of challenges coming up in the rodeo. It’s time to get out the whip and spurs and see where the dusty trails take us. Happy wrangling words, everyone.

    • Norah

      I’m back with my story: https://wp.me/p3O5Jj-1Fu
      On the Trail Down Under
      The hooves thundered along the trail kicking up a storm of dust. Mary watched the cloud clear the trees and turn towards her across the home paddock.
      How often had the boys been told to not push their horses so hard?
      “Might as well talk to a dead cow,” her dad always said.
      Before they’d reined in their mounts, Mary was outside, ready to give them a serve.
      “Mum! Mum! It’s Kid and Pal. They’re here,” they shouted.
      Mary sighed. Hadn’t they outgrown imaginary friends?
      Her jaw dropped when, out of the dust, two figures materialised. “G’day,” they said.

      • Anne Goodwin (Annecdotist)

        Wow, this is fabulous, Norah. (Off to repeat myself on your blog.)

      • Norah

        Thanks, Anne. 🙂

      • D. Avery @shiftnshake

        Jist wanna say, bein’ fictional is heaps different than bein’ imaginary. But both is real real. An’ thanks fer the trip down under!

      • Norah

        Yeah, I think Mary realises that now. 🙂

      • Jules

        My how Pal and Kidd are getting around! 🙂

      • Norah

        Anything can happen in fiction. 🙂

    • Charli Mills

      Both spring and fall feel energizing to me. I think of your blooms as my fall fades. Time to hit the dusty trails!

      • Norah

        Yep. Gotta keep on ridin’.

    • Jules

      The truth is always hiding behind the eyes of the teller of tall tales.
      May the kernels of truth be found and planted to honor those who were lost along the way…

    • Charli Mills

      A good use of the prompt, Anne!

  17. suespitulnik

    My Life’s Dusty Roads – BOTS

    Growing up dusty dirt roads connected friends farms. We drove them to hunt and parked on them to explore life.

    In my thirties I drove dusty roads alone into the mountains, looking for me.

    Now in retirement, Charli Mills introduced me to Stegnar and Abbey, lovers of open and natural places.

    Then Sean Prentiss took me along to Find Abbey and I rode on some of the same roads while driving Rt66.

    Now I’m riding the same roads again with the Ghost Rider, who is sharing his knowledge of ghosts, wishing life didn’t have them.

    Coincidence. I think not.

    • Jules

      Ghosts can be interesting companions if you let them…
      I’m thinking more along the lines of ghost memories that I’d rather forget…

      • suespitulnik

        The author of The Ghost Rider is healing from losing both his wife and daughter within 14 months.

      • Jules

        May The Ghost Rider find peace in the blessed memories of those he loved.

    • D. Avery @shiftnshake

      Are you reading the book by Neil Peart? That was a good one, I read it years ago. I hope you are traveling by motorcycle.

      • suespitulnik

        Yes, Nep as he calls himself is giving me good fodder to deal with grief. It’s actually his second book.

      • D. Avery @shiftnshake

        I haven’t read the first but believe bicycle was the vehicle, Africa the continent. I picked up Ghost Rider because well, Rush, and of course the motorcycle, then was impressed with Mr. Peart as a human and a writer. PS: The Motorcycle Diaries- it’s not about a motorcycle.

    • Charli Mills

      I love the introspective feel to your wandering the roads. May it be a balm to grief, to ride where others have tread in joy and sorrow, too, noting the unmistakable beauty of it all.

  18. Charli Mills

    Thanks, Frank!

  19. Hugh W. Roberts

    Great storytelling, Frank. What comes around, goes around. Yes?

  20. Charli Mills

    Thanks, Padre.

  21. Charli Mills

    Thanks, Anita!

  22. Charli Mills

    Thanks, Chel!

  23. D. Avery @shiftnshake

    Take the trail ta Dusty’s, Cowpokes. It’s the frien’ly establishment where ever’one stays in line. Till the music stops.

  24. Jules

    It is fun when you can be included and enjoy everyone for who they are without judgement.

  25. Charli Mills

    Thanks, Hugh!

  26. Hugh W. Roberts

    …and the beer runs out.

  27. Hugh W. Roberts

    Absolutely, Jules. I’ve been the victim of quite a bit of judgement because of my sexuality over my life. Not so much now, but when I was growing up there was a lot of it around.

  28. Hugh W. Roberts

    It sure is, Jules. You can also learn so much just from the comments. So sorry to hear you also experienced bullying.

  29. Jules

    I grew up in NYC in the 1960’s … And was always taught to accept people for who they were. Dad was part owner of a restaurant then and if someone famous came in – he wouldn’t let anyone bother them. Respect goes a long way.

    I was bullied just for being shy. I got over it… But darn those memories creep in occasionally. The Ranch is a good place to be 😀

  30. Jules

    We live, we grow stronger, and we cultivate empathy… all good things for experience.

    Learning what not to do by bad examples is also learning. I think that as writers our honest emotions (on in our words, within moderation – as any negativity in excess can swing the pendulum the other way) draws readers. 😀


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