Welcome to Carrot Ranch Literary Community where creative writers from around the world and across genres gather to write 99-word stories. A collection of prompted 99-word stories reads like literary anthropology. Diverse perspectives become part of a collaboration.

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Those published at Carrot Ranch are The Congress of Rough Writers.
My Mom Selfie by Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris
Looking into the mirror, I see my mom looking back at me. The woman in the mirror has the same wrinkles in nearly the same places. Though her eyes were black as coal and mine are a greenish-amber; they are the same shape and size and both having a distant, distracted look.
The shape of our lips and even the color was identical. It’s the outside wrinkles of our mouths that sets us apart. Hers from being a chain smoker, addicted to those Pall Mall cigarettes. Mine from laughter and love.
Too bad I got my dad’s nose!
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Taking on the Best by Sue Spitulnik
Tessa sat in the warm sunshine on their deck, hand sewing the binding on her latest quilt. She reminisced about the good times in her teens when she and her mother enjoyed scratch cooking and sewing together. Then she wondered why her mother was so often critical of her these days. Her thoughts wandered to the time she spent with Michael’s mother and how she was much more patient, positive, generous, and willing to help whenever needed. The light bulb came on. Tessa felt she had adopted the best attributes of both women, and her mother might be jealous.
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Mom by Saifun Hassam
Mom’s first wife was a mermaid. Her farewell note talked about impossible love.
My dad was mom’s second wife. Mom’s genes were mostly human. The rest were Venusian genes. I inherited my azure hair and sea-green eyes from my Venusian great-great-grandmother.
I was seven when we went to Venus. It was her first visit ever. She turned her love for adventure into a tourist business. I missed Earth for a while. At mom’s insistence, I wrote to dad but he never replied.
I took over our growing tourist business when Mom fell ill. Maybe I’ll visit Earth one day.
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Phoebe-1915 by Bill Engleson
The dust is blowing in.
It clings to the curtains, to everything like a sickness.
The summer wind is swirling so.
Sweet children, come to me. Bring me my babe.
I need to suckle him.
I need him close.
I need you all so very close.
Oh, Thomas, I have born you five. We have suffered so with the loss of the twin at birth. And you my love, the heartache of your first lost love wears you away.
And now, I am on the verge of leaving.
What is the date…the last day of June?
I am done.
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When Dreams Aren’t Enough by Miss Judy
When 13-year old Isabel is betrothed to 34-year old Frederick, she dreams of an idyllic love affair.
Frederick, a wealthy English landowner, sees a prize possession; he will be richly rewarded.
Conceiving immediately Isabel endures a difficult pregnancy before giving birth to a girl. Disappointed, Frederick proclaims, “We will have another.”
Still deeply depressed, Isabel conceives quickly. After another difficult pregnancy and exhausting labor, a son is stillborn.
Frederick blames Isabel for killing his son. With a husband who has only contempt and daughter she cannot love, Isabel’s dreams die. Only pain and disappointment fill this mother’s loveless heart.
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Thanks Bad Mom by Simon
She was the light, the light of happiness, the light that gave everything I wanted, in simple words I saw heaven.
When there was light, there is dark too, it had over powered the light, at certain point the bright days became just a memory. The darker days gave me scars of mental health, the days I wished I died and regret having you, only I know how much I wanted to grow up and escape from you. Despite of all the flaws you are still my Mom, I won’t forgive you, but thank you for making me stronger.
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Mother Without a Clue by Duane L Herrmann
What to do? What to do? She didn’t know what to do. Her mother had no mother, at least after age eight, so she had only hints of what to do, the rest was overwhelming. What do to? She was trapped with no way out. In her bewilderment and frustration, she screamed; at her husband, at her babies and her children as they grew. Life for them was hell. She didn’t know what to do. Finally, at the very end, she was able to show to her oldest child that she did care. It turned his life upside down.
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Mom’s Selfie by Scott Bailey
I carefully return her photograph to my cigar box of treasures. She’s young and pretty in the faded black and white picture and it’s the only image I have of her.
“The Triangle Factory fire,” murmured voices whispered whenever I was around. I was too young to remember her and that picture is all I have anchoring me to some time and someone. Without that, would I even exist?
Rebellious in orphanages and ill suited for adoption, I ran away, making the train tracks my home. My Mom’s image, forever burned in my mind, can never leave me again.
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Selfless Selfie? (Spot On?) by JulesPaige
Motherland
Created image,
Barren scene
Dark forest
After devastating flames
Seeds grow by starlight
Gertie held tightly to the sobbing fragile child. A seed not yet ready to bloom unattended. Jane’s heart was scared first by growing up in an orphanage, then placed into servitude. While Gertie had not borne any of her own children she had raised several daughters. Each learning much from the other. Gertie would give of herself again, her compassion, her knowledge and do whatever she could to help Jane become an independent woman of means. That was the task all mothers had wasn’t it?
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Modern Motherhood by Reena Saxena
The meeting starts at 9.30 am. I’m late.
The kids have to manage with takeaways. They love it, but I’m not sure if it is the right thing for healthy growth.
I stop in my tracks by the sarcastic look in my boss’s eyes “You’re not the only mother out here. We need to run a business.”
Life goes on. The kids are doing fine wherever they are.
I’ve developed lifestyle diseases, and need to move to an assisted home. All the stress has taken its toll.
And my children think I never had enough time for them.
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Portrait of a Mom by Sadje
I am a mom of three and a grandmother to three. I’m not a perfect mother, no one is. But I do try. I often make mistakes and forget things that I ought to remember but I do try.
I gave up my career so that I could be a full-time mom. I did what all mothers do to make sure that the children are well looked after.
My children love me but they aren’t very demonstrative. That’s why when they do something like this I am so pleased.
A customized poem and hand-painted dupatta to show her love.
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Disappeared 14 by Liz Husebye Hartmann
Bethany grabbed her purse, the picture of her four children, and the small box of confetti containing her shredded, many-times rejected work.
Sticking her head in her boss’ office, she recoiled at the stink of gin, but chirped, “Today’s my last day! Here’s your grant proposal!”
She winked as she dumped its contents into the air with a wide sweep of her arm, dropped the box, and jogged out of the building. Car keys jingling, she thought, “Pick up ice-cream? No, it’ll be a family picnic on that abandoned mansion’s grounds!”
New job, new life. She’d missed her kids!
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Look in Awe and Wonder by Scott Rhodie
She’s always available and ready to help.
Bright, cheerful, and without complaint, she’s ready from early until long after bed.
The light of life is a familiar glow and waiting, as she heals my tired body and attempts to stop rivers of tears.
She protects, clothes, feeds and shelters, but still asks for little in return.
Not everyone feels the same as they take and take, forever taking. She must feel hurt and alone in this universe of ours.
Let’s come together for her, as she wraps her arms around one and all.
Our glorious and only Mother Earth.
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Mothering by Norah Colvin
She paused in the shopping mall, one arm cradling her week-old infant, the other hand her breast as she gently positioned it enabling the infant to suckle. So engrossed was she in her newborn that the world of passing shoppers and nearby café chatter was non-existent. Her face radiated love, peace and joy, the child’s adoration, contentment and bliss. Serenity. I smiled as I passed, captivated in the moment, drawn into the circle of life and love, both envying and admiring her confidence and lack of inhibition in a situation won for her by generations of mothers before her.
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A Matter of Life by Hugh W. Roberts
It was a matter of life or death. But if only she had known that she wasn’t the only one racing toward her child as he sunk toward the bottom of the ocean floor.
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As the creature snatched at the sinking, lifeless object, it used its other tentacle to grab the prey that pursued it and squeezed the life out of it. Now it could feed the offspring it had given birth to, which would otherwise have died on this strange, watery planet.
A mother had to do everything in her power to ensure the survival of her children.
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Build A Mum by Geoff Le Pard
Tobias Frankenstein, distant relative of Dickie Frankenstein, novelty pretzel designer, lacked one thing: a mother. He set about creating the perfect parent. After months of testing and tubing, he fed the Little Tittweaking Electric Corporation meter with one hundred pound coins and pulled the switch, holding his breath. Would she have those characteristics he associated with the perfect mother? He started, opening his eyes.
‘Toby Frankenstein, if I’ve told you once…’ the chastisement continued uninterrupted and uninterruptible for an hour. When finally Toby was tucked in bed, his teeth cleaned, he smiled: he’d got exactly what he wished for.
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For This Also, Thanks Mom by Gary A. Wilson Stories
Shirley, the daughter of an unfavored marriage between her Danish mother and Italian father, met, loved, and married a gentle man.
With her mom shunned by her own family, Shirley moved on.
She wanted college, but life’s immediacies drove elsewhere. Instead, she joined the biggest department store in town and soon rose to the second most senior role of assistant manager.
Everyone knew and loved her as friendly, hard-working, and driven to help others. Despite diseases and crises, her family thrived.
Shirley’s children knew almost nothing of their grandmother’s disfavored marriage.
Unnourished, this root of racism withered and died.
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Ethnicity–Does It Matter? by Nancy Brady
Mom always said that her father never said where they came from except to say they were hilligans. When I asked what that meant, she said she didn’t know.
Not knowing or questioning her father didn’t seem to bother her. Mom accepted his explanation and considered the matter closed. Not me, though, I wondered.
She knew her grandparents surnames and from those, I can only surmise that they were Scottish.Could they have on the wrong side at the Battle of Culloden and been forced to emigrate? Could they have been Highlanders kicked off their lands? I’ll never know.
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Her Life by Ann Edall-Robson
Memories spin in her head like an old news reel. A young woman, waiting for the cue to board the Aquitania. Leaving all she knew, to follow her soldier husband to a foreign land across the Atlantic. Her Gran seeing her off. The cabin, her new home, wind blowing through cracks. Wood stove, frozen water buckets, and learning to cook. A mother-in-law who never thought she was good enough. The bairns lost. The two who lived. The girl now has daughters of her own. Five generations of women blazing their trail with grit, determination, laughter and tears.
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My Image of Mom by Colleen M. Chesebro
At night, in between dreams, I think of you often. What did you look like compared to the few black and white photos of a Russian dark-haired beauty I have tucked in my photo album?
My older sister once told me you had eyes the color of cornflowers. My older brother said you were always kind. I wish I had known you or had memories of you as “my” mother.
Yet, when I close my eyes, I imagine you holding me in your arms. I sense your love. You are the mother I’d always dreamed of. You’re inside me.
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Magic Momma by Kerry E.B. Black
As a pre-teen, I curled into myself, buried my hurts and withdrew from society, but my mother never gave up on me. She interpreted my silence and saw through sullen acts. She read to me from her experiences and invented activities to draw me out of my shell of solitude.
With a young Solomon’s insight, she imparted wisdom in gentle parables. Her touch atop my head soothed. Her embrace protected. With patience she forged armor to insulate oversensitive me. She weaved magic as a cloak and studded it with stars.
Through her, I lived. Because of her, I thrive.
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The Dance Tree by Anne Goodwin
Follow me to the forest if you want to meet the real me, the me neither my husband nor his mother can bear to see. We’ll pass the bees that I love almost as much as I love my children. When I hum a lullaby, the bees don’t sting.
Come, we’ll leave the path and push through brambles. You must not mind if they scratch. There, in the clearing, the tree leafed with ribbons. My church, my shrine, my loneliness, my refuge, my grief, my hideaway. My memorial: a coloured strip of cloth blooming there for every lost child.
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Mudder Mucky Kid by D. Avery
“Good ta have ya back Pal.”
“Thanks. Kid too?”
“Course! Where’s Kid at, anyways?”
“There. A ranch hand and swine reunion is only a motion away.”
“Oh, yeah, a-huggin Curly.”
“Yep. Now feedin thet hog her fav’rite dish, curried carrots an cornbread.”
“Lucky pig.”
“Curly?”
“Yep. Now look, Kid’s bathin Curly an now’s rubbin sunscreen all over her. How thoughtful. An whut’s that, a new collar?”
“Necklace. Pearls fer swine. Uh-oh. Kid’s hand’s got stuck in thet necklace with Curly took off runnin through the barns.”
“Them barns ain’t been shoveled since y’all disappeared.”
“Shift! What a mudder!”
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This is a great collection! 🙂
I’ll offer a more detailed analysis of the stories later but I just wanted to say D. Averys’ Paul Simon reference left me with a huge smile!
Ha! Glad you picked up on that.
Considering the “Mother” theme this week, I couldn’t have thought of a better line. I really liked the rest of the story, but you earned extra credit in my book with that little nugget. Well done!
I agree. I saw it too.
This was a lovely collection. I enjoyed how everyone interpreted their mother, or someone else’s mother. I enjoyed Hugh’s take on motherhood! What a surprise. 😀
I agree with you on Hughs story, it made my list of faves this week (so did yours!).
Scott, thanks. I never know if I push the emotions too far. Sometimes, I just let the story pour out of me. I appreciate your thoughts. <3
Great stories as always. A lot of emotion on display this week, which can be expected considering the prompt.
The stories that stood out for me this week were tough to nail down, each entry was very strong and the depth of feeling was very evident in all of them. So, just from a personal taste stand point, I liked these four the most:
Hughs “A Matter of Life”, I liked the sci-fi angle and the ‘ultimate price’ surprise ending.
Gypsie-Amis’ “My Mom Selfie”, I liked the way she kept the direction going all one way until the very end, that was a good and funny ending.
Bills’ “Phoebe-1915”, read like a real dust-bowl tragedy, very sad yet probably very true.
Colleens’ “My Image of Mom”, pictures of a mother you never knew, similar to the story I posted except better!
Thanks, Scott. I’m always on the lookout for twists in my flash fiction pieces. They don’t always appear, but I’m delighted when people tell me how much they enjoy them.
There are so many different takes on this prompt. Some about mothers they never knew. Those tore at my heart. Some with mothers that were perfect, new mothers, watery mothers, even Kid trying to be a Mudder. I’m still smiling at that one. 🙂 Great responses.
Mother’s are needed to make the world go round. Some father’s can be mothers too – I think the level of care any one person can gift is good. Birth though isn’t the only defintion of being a ‘Mother’ 😀
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A great collection, and some really made me stop and think. I was interested in the memoir pieces especially. There are so many different mothers and ways of mothering.
I met mothers here with different personalities, some loved, some shunned for good reason, and all in just a few tales. Thank you for the visuals. I tell my own children, “I did the best I could with the knowledge I had at the time.” It wasn’t always right, or enough, nor based on their personality instead of my own. We talk about their childhood days now, thank goodness.
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