March 12: Story Challenge in 99-words

Written by Charli Mills

Charli Mills, a born buckaroo, makes literary art accessible at CarrotRanch.com. She writes about the veteran spouse experience and women forgotten to history.

March 12, 2024

Red runs the Maasto Hito Trails beyond Roberts Street on the Keweenaw Peninsula. He finally gets to be a dog! I’m not far behind, ready to whistle should he dip out of my sight.

The Winter That Wasn’t exposes our woods without their blankets of snow. It’s stark. Today feels like spring and yet we still have three months before it’s advised to plant.

It’s confusing. One day the ground is frozen, the ruts become tripping hazards. The next, the sun illuminates a blue sky and the mud softens. Back and forth. How will Nature respond?

For today, I’m blessed to get on the hiking trails early. Actually, I’m blessed to be on the hiking trails at all. I’ve longed for a companion — two- or four-legged, and have been hopeful that Red would be my hiking buddy. When Todd took Mause to the range, Red and I got a chance to test the trails.

What is important in a hiking companion? Someone with a sense of joy/fun/play. A good buddy will share your curiosity to check out this wonder and that. I also want a companion who will chill at an overlook or leave a leak on a tree. It feels good to share the trail with someone who forgives easily, especially if you are a mouth-breather.

Red, as a four-legged hiking companion candidate, also had to demonstrate recall, as in the opposite of running off. He can’t play coy as Mause does. She’ll pretend to come but swerve at the last minute, extending the merry chase of German Short-haired Pointers everywhere. Taking Red into the woods alone was the only way I could experience what he’d be like as a hiking dog.

We bypass two huge distractions — the tiny and large dog parks are both occupied. Red gets excited to see other dogs, so I’m wondering where his focus will be in the woods. Will squirrels tempt him? Will scents plug his ears like they do with Mause? We are now beyond the dog parks and I let Red loose. Ahead he goes.

He recalls easily with a whistle or two and remains visible as if we agree on shared lines of sight. He runs through leaves that crunch beneath his paws. He pauses often and stays at my side when I do. Red leaves a leak on a tree, and I notice it’s brief. He’s never marked, only needing to pee a few times a day and before bed. It’s un-dog-like. He lifts his leg for another short burst. He runs and leaps over a log, turns around, and leaps over it again. And he leaves a leak three more times.

Red proved himself a winning hiking companion. The greatest joy he offers is seeing the beauty I see, too. I laughed so loud a crow told me to keep it down. Crow caught Red’s curiosity, too. But the peeing was the best. Red felt at ease on the trail. Finally, he could leave a leak whenever he wanted. Freedom. Today was the first day he ever marked like a dog — he said, “Red’s home.”

March 12, 2024, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about leaving a leak. What (or who) is leaking? How can you use the leak to create tension? Expand the idea of leaks. Go where the prompt leads!

  • Submit by March 19, 2024. ***THIS WEEK ONLY PT 2*** Submit by email to wordsforpeople (at) gmail (dot) com. Use your Higher Intelligence to decode the email address. The Collection publishes on the Thursday following the next Challenge. Stories must be 99 words. Rules & Guidelines.
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    • In the body of the text, include your story title, byline (the name you publish under to maintain your copyright), 99-word story (please include formatting, including line spacing between paragraphs and dialog), and a link if you want to include your website or blog post. I will acknowledge the receipt of your story by March 12.

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10 Comments

  1. Norah

    Red sounds perfect for you as a hiking companion. Enjoy your hikes!

    • Charli Mills

      He got the job, Norah! We will add some joy to our weeks with hikes.

  2. Michael B. Fishman

    I miss having a hiking companion and the, “What is important in a hiking companion?” paragraph really spoke. I’m happy Red took to the trail so well.

    • Charli Mills

      The right fit for a hiking companion is real, Michael. Red’s a good boy!

  3. Jules

    I did a different leak here;
    Faulty Flow

    Thankfully my spare isn’t a Maypop…
    Note; maypop tires – worn, slick tires which could burst any time.

    • Charli Mills

      Ha! Maypop tires. I’ve had that brand before. PressinUrLuck is another. Thanks for the faulty flow!

  4. Jules

    Charli,

    Glad Red is working out! Our own were rescues. We’ve family that also took in resuces…
    Some dogs and cats, others cats and chickens and other birds!!

    • Charli Mills

      To rescue an animal is to connect deeply with the greater life of the world. What a selfless thing to do. Good on you, Jules!

  5. D. Avery @shiftnshake

    Goin Fer Broke

    “We there yet, Pal?”
    “Dunno, Kid.”
    “Feel like we’re neither here nor there. Cain’t tell if we’re comin or goin.”
    “Speakin a goin, I gotta go.”
    “Agin, Pal? Gee whiz, ever’time we git set ta leave, you have ta leave a leak.”
    “Ees true, Pal. Eet ees like you are stalling. I tink you not only find dees move awkward, I tink eet scares you.”
    “Ya don’t know whut yer talkin ‘bout, LeGume.”
    “I do.”
    “Doc Ranger!”
    “Pepe is right, Pal. This move is scaring the pi** out of you.”
    “Mebbe Pal’s jist markin territory. Fer old time’s sake.”
    XXX
    “Hey Pal, do old ranch hands wear boxers or briefs? Depends! Git it? Yeah, Pal, mebbe you should put on a nappy a’fore saddlin up fer the move.”
    “Very funny, Kid. Uh, speakin a saddlin up, I gotta see a man ‘bout a hoss.”
    “See, Doc? We cain’t get anywheres with all Pal’s weein.
    “Hey, Pal, whilst yer liquidatin, yer assets is showin.
    “Doc, try an talk some sense a’fore Pal spends anuther penny.”
    “Pal, don’t think of it as leaving, but rather going home.”
    “Yep. An that ol’ ranch hand’s goin wee, wee, wee, all the way home.”
    XXX
    “Shush, Kid. Doc?”
    “Yes, Pal?”
    “I reckon yer theory does hold water.”
    “You sure don’t, Pal! All ya been doin is passin water.”
    “Shush, Kid.
    “Reckon I am a might skeered a this site migration, Doc. All I’ve ever known is this here ranch. I’m ‘fraid anywheres else I’ll be a fish outta water. Speakin a which, I gotta make water.”
    “Admitting your fear is a step forward, Pal.”
    “Reckon.”
    “Yer in deep, Pal. Get it? Yer. In.”
    “Pal, it’s scary but it’s not like you’re stepping into the void.”
    “Speakin a which…”
    “You’ll be relieved in the end.”

    • Charli Mills

      Ha, ha! As long as the whole Ranch Yarn gang comes along, we’re all goin’ be fine! We are in the void and it’s weird. That “gift” widget is driving me crazy. WP has them locked down so I can’t remove it.

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