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Deep waters fill my cup. A teabag bobs like a small raft, brown stains the water. The cup — Polishware handpainted in circles and flowers, blue and orange — is too hot to hold, so I pull down the long sleeves of my flannel shirt like makeshift potholders, and I grip the cup between my covered hands. Heat seeps into cold bones. It’s 40 degrees F tonight, and the Hub has all the windows flung open. I huddle in my recliner, tuck up my knees, and sip hot tea. I contemplate deep waters.

In my mind’s eye, I can see to the bottom of the lake. The deep water is so clear it acts as a lens. I scope the watery landscape for large agates, but sediment covers the rocks, and they all look like brown cobbles. Farther out, the shelf drops so steeply all you can see is clear blue, clear blue, clear blue. I don’t dare venture that far, a novice in a kayak. I know better than to tempt Lady Lake into an invitation to tea below. The vastness of water feels so big it swells around me.

I once lost sight of mountains. In all of my life, I could look to familiar ridges and peaks. I used to tell people I was born in the Gabilans, raised in the Sierra, and educated in the Rockies. Then we moved to Iowa. The final mountain ranges faded, and prairie flattened all around me. In a panic, I wondered if this was what it was like to lose sight of land. Did a sailor feel what I felt when the shore dipped away? Roads laid out in grids across Iowa, and every day I’d get lost; the farms with house, silos, and cornfields all looked the same. There were no mountains to guide me home. Laura Ingalls Wilder once lived in Iowa and never wrote about it. All I have to say is that I lost my identity there.

Deep waters brought me home. Not to Montana, but to Minnesota with its North Shore of Lake Superior — the craggy, wild side of the lake. I orientated to co-ops, local food, and up north. Identity adapted. No mountain, but I could feel the energy of the lake, and I was lulled. Every summer, we tossed the canoe on the Expedition, loaded up three kids, tents, and outdoor cooking kitchen. On a lake in the boundary waters, the Hub and I paddled, the kids on shore, when we heard our daughter bellow, “Mooooose!” We cut across those deep waters of emerald green, headed to the rocks and pines of shore, frantically calling out the names of our children. That canoe never glided so fast. One daughter bumped into the backend of a moose and scared it worse than it scared her. We laugh to this day over her bellow. That kid could have been a yodeler. I decided I was pleased that moose lived near mountains and deep waters. A connection.

They say moose crossed the ice of Lake Superior when it froze between Canada and Isle Royale. The wolves followed. Another camping trip north, the kids and I rode Voyeguer II across Lake Superior to visit the most remote National Park in the lower 48. Over deep waters, the air temperatures drop 30 to 40 degrees from land. We saw another moose that day, swimming along the shore of the island. We hiked the park trails, and when the Voyeguer blasted its horn to call passengers back to harbor, we turned around, passing another person from our boat. He started to say something to me about my dog. I gave him a funny look because I had no dog with us. The wolf who decided to be our canine companion dashed off into the trees. No one had time to yell, “Wolf!” Somehow, the kids were less excited over a predator following them than running into a sleeping moose. We crossed back over those deep waters on 14-foot swells.

That’s how I like to enjoy Lake Superior — on her shoreline facing the roar of rolling water. She’s become my mountains, my solitude, my place of reflection. May we all take time to reflect. Waters run deep.

June 11, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story deep waters. It can be literal or metaphorical. Think of a place and person and situation. Explore. Bathe. Renew. Go where the prompt leads!

Respond by June 16, 2020. Use the comment section below to share, read, and be social. You may leave a link, pingback, or story in the comments. If you want to be published in the weekly collection, please use the form.  Rules & Guidelines.

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Into Deep Waters by Charli Mills

What to place in my memory box? That last night out at the Fitz when the sun slanted across the western horizon dazzling like a copper-clad ruby while five-foot waves chomped the last of winter’s ice. March 13. We reached across the table, five friends sharing poutine and smoked brisket. We sang happy birthday. Later we dodged deer crossing the road back to Calumet, we stopped for a Bota Box of red wine. We found toilet paper, joking that Yoopers wouldn’t panic buy TP. Into deep waters, memories plunge. Most vivid — the last time I felt normal.


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  2. That’s some good tea.

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  3. […] June 11: Flash Fiction Challenge – Deep Waters […]

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  4. I think the landscape of our childhoods influence what we take for normal. I grew up on the coast and close to lakes and now am near neither (although the distances are small relative to what you to travel in the USA); it’s also taken me a while to adjust to the gentler hills of the Peak District compared to the spikier Lake District fells.

    And we’ve drastically changed our lives since before covid – I remember you writing about your partying before lockdown which you expertly condensed in your flash. It’s not so long ago but history is moving fast. I’m still stuck on the topic of justice, racism and the transatlantic slave trade, so you can probably guess who’s in my deep water:

    Racism, entitlement and protest in the age of covid

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    • Charli Mills says:

      The Azorean Portuguese have a term called suadade — I learned it to mean homesickness for the mountains, but Google defines it as a melancholy for perceived happiness past. Childhood, and often generational regions, certainly influence us.

      By name, I would think “Peak District” would possess the spikier hills. Have you ever experienced thinking a place was flat and then walking or biking it? Of course, I saw buildings with a different skew — four stories was tall. Anything over that was like 20 stories to me. I remember my first job in Minneapolis, my boss had me drop off a package on my way home. I realized where he was directing me and said, “Oh, that tall building.” “Tall?” he asked. “Yeah, it’s like 20 stories.” Turns out it was eight!

      With suadade, I remember that final pre-COVID party. Yes, history is clipping along. Perhaps it’s like one of those earthquakes where plates have rubbed, stuck for centuries, and finally break free with massive shockwaves. I think it appropriate your deep waters go to the epicenter.

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      • Yeah, Peak is confusing, simply an old word for hill. Our highest point is 636 m (2,088 feet) and that’s on plateau! Britain’s highest peak, Ben Nevis, is twice that height at 1,345 m — still low by your standards. I like your specific concept of suade, but will ask a Brazilian friend to arbitrate.

        Regarding your concept of tall buildings, it reminds me of cultures I’ve read about which don’t bother with words for numbers larger than what can be estimated with the naked eye. If you don’t need a concept you don’t need the word!

        Gosh, I do hope something good comes out of this mess. The Right has a remarkable ability to recover.

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      • Charli Mills says:

        Oh, I’d like to hear what your Brazillian friend says. My second-great grandfather on my mom’s maternal side was Brazilian Portuguese.

        I’d still like to hike your peaks one day. I enjoy watching Time Team and Tony Robin’s walks across the UK, and there’s steep terrain! But I hadn’t considered the absence of concepts, but it does make sense. No one had ever asked me how tall a building was before and my observations were limited.

        Ugh. Reminds me of the ’70s toy, “weebles wobble but they don’t fall down.”

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  5. Liz H says:

    I think that’s another opportunity form the pandemic: we have the time and impetus to really miss and re-value the things we’ve sometimes taken for granted. Their meaning lies deeper than we often notice, though they’ve written themselves in our souls.
    Lovely, soulful blog , Charlie!

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  6. noelleg44 says:

    Lovely, Charli. Your story took me away. My husband sailed the Great Lakes in his younger days but he always said Huron was the clearest.

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  7. denmaniacs4 says:

    Truth is, some memories just sit out there on the edge of recall, waiting to be pulled in, yet struggling to keep their secrets, not wanting exposure.

    A Memory of Long Lake

    It was my toughest bike ride ever.

    Up to then, anyways.

    Ernie and I usually rode up to the Dam to swim.

    Or walked two blocks to the Millstream.

    Not this time.

    “We can’t do it,” I whined. “Gotta be a hundred miles.”

    “Nah. Ten.”


    “Come on.”

    Early July.


    Pumping away.

    Dripping sweat.

    Train tracks snuggling the old highway.

    Wishing we were crows.

    Got there by noon.


    A dozen local kids swimming away.

    “There’s really no bottom to it, Ernie?”

    “Goes all the way to China, I hear.”

    I believed every word then.

    Kinda still do.

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  8. […] Carrot Ranch June 11June 11, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story deep waters. It can be literal or metaphorical. Think of a place and person and situation. Explore. Bathe. Renew. Go where the prompt leads! Respond by June 16, 2020. […]

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  9. Jules says:


    Normal is so different for so many. We went out to dinner last week – our Yellow allows dining outside with all plastic… One friend said it was the first time she’d drunk wine from a plastic cup and would bring her own glass one next time. I did another haibun for this prompt – mixed with some book titles from another: Enjoy:

    There’s Always the Eye of a Needle

    Sun under wood, shaded yard
    Scavenger loop, just to see the ‘mettle’ of the earth
    My endurance lacking in the humidity for the time and being

    And never said a word (not boo), let the crow catch a few seeds…
    Those blackbirds they are skittish ~
    Like me shopping with a mask this morning, just wanting home…

    But before that, I paused at the first yard sale of the season –
    Reaching into the depths of my wallet for two dollars.
    More buttons and spools ~

    if the bobbin would
    stop cutting its own thread I’d
    sew me together


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  10. […] Author’s Notes: It’s a Friday. It’s a story. Call it Friday Fact or Fiction. Some stories will be 100% fact (or close to it) while others will be 100% fiction. Most will be a little bit of both. You, the reader, can delight in speculating where the story belongs.Today’s entry is in a category known as flash fiction. There are many other names (micro, mini, nano, etc) and a variety of different lengths (one-word stories, six-word stories, 12-word stories, 100 words, 500 words.) Carrot Ranch is a dynamic online literary community for those practicing their craft, reading stories and discussing the process. Charlie Mills hosts the weekly Flash Fiction challenge which limits stories to 99 words – no more, no less. This week’s challenge is to write with the prompt of “deep waters.” […]

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  11. […] If you want to participate, here’s the link:  CARROT RANCH […]

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  12. She was eighty years my senior, I the youngest child of her youngest child’s oldest child. From the 20 years our lives overlapped I have only a handful of memories, recalled like sepia snapshots. But if I examine any one of those snapshot memories of us together, somewhere in the frame, in distinct shiny color, is her queen conch shell. Me trying to fathom the spindrift shell, she saying put it to your ear, smiling as ageless ocean washes over me in a rushing tide; us swimming easily, floating in timeless deep waters that muffle all but that moment.

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  13. […] This was written with the prompt deep waters provided by Carrot Ranch’s June 11 Flash Fiction Challenge. […]

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  15. susansleggs says:

    Charli, I grew up in the Finger Lakes of New York state and felt right at home in mountainous western Wahington state, but lost in flat Illinois. I now live on the hilly side of Rochester, NY and fully understand why I picked this neighborhood. It’s a comfort. Your kayak ride sounds like a calming experience, though lacking a loon. And that moose…what a childhood memory for your family.
    I am only going to leave a link to my flash this week because I want people to go to my blog to see who I had the privilege of knowing during my school years. Both families were very large, and welcome additions in our classrooms and on our sports teams.

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    • Charli Mills says:

      Oh, yes, we appreciate that environmental comfort. It’s unsettling to see such different landscapes. Often, certain cultures settle in places in the New World that reminded them of the old.

      Alas, no loons. Though I have seen some other ducks.

      What fun to have famous classmates!

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  16. […] week’s piece comes courtesy of the prompt over at Carrot Ranch: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story deep […]

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  17. Your post exudes peace, Charli. Loved it.
    Here’s my offering for this week.

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  18. TanGental says:

    The boys are getting closer to the Ranch…

    Profoundly Shallow

    ‘Where are we?’
    ‘The Great Lakes, Morgan. Lake Erie.’
    ‘It sure is eerie. Too bloody quiet.’
    ‘Can’t we just enjoy its magnificence?’
    ‘It scares the willies out of me. It’s… so deep.’
    ‘Yes mysterious. Profound.’
    ‘It’s just a lot of the wet stuff that given half a chance will swallow me whole.’
    ‘It’s majestic. Unknowable. Imagine what memories it holds…. You know what they say about Still Waters?’
    ‘He’s the best Pokemon Go hunter ever?’
    ‘Stile Warters, German Guy. He caught more Pokemon last year. Shall we see if any are here?’
    ‘Sure. Why not try out there?’

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  19. Kiddhartha

    “Feels like a long while since we jist ranched.”

    “Yep, it’s good ta be out ridin’ the range, herdin’ hosses, gittin’ ‘em ta greener pastures. Whoa. There’s a river. Think we kin ford it?”

    “We ain’t gotta buy it Kid, jist gtta git acrost it. Carefully.”

    “Water looks still.”

    “Still waters run deep. We’ll git the hosses down ta the river, let ‘em quench their thirst an’ rest up. ***
    Dang, Kid. I led ‘em ta water but cain’t git these hosses ta drink. Kid?”

    “Shush, Pal. I’m a settin’ here watchin’ the river flow. Havin’ me a think.”

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  20. From the Deep

    He and Hope followed the brook through the softwoods to his favorite fishing spot. But when Hope saw the clear deep pool she was no longer interested in catching trout. She became a trout, flashing sleek and slippery through the water.
    Hope stood briefly, a little girl again. Then she knelt beneath the surface, remained curled up on the gravel bottom. He held his own breath until finally Hope unfolded, emerging at last from the cold water. Solemnly she disclosed that she’d been a rock for ten million years.
    “There’s magic here, Daddy.”
    “Yes, Hope. I see it too.”

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  21. Norah says:

    I felt lulled by your post, drawing in its peace. Yes, even with moose and wolves, it felt peaceful, still, like deep waters. I think it is time for you to allow the waters to wash over and refresh you. You’re fighting some difficult battles. Your flash is excellent too. Life certainly doesn’t feel normal and we do need to reach deep within to find those vestiges of what we were before. Maybe we should reach out only those threads that will take us forward into a positive future. Look after yourself, Charli.

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    • Charli Mills says:

      Norah, I feel like this is an opportunity to rework the threads worth creating a different future. Now the heat has descended and I’m really wanting those deep waters to wash over me! Thanks. You take care, too.

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      • Norah says:

        We do need to undo some threads from the past to weave a new future. Some threads may be reworked. Others must be discarded – forever.


  22. […] Another piece of philosophical potpourri from the minds of Morgan and Logan as they explore America in their quest to find the carrot ranch, based on this week’s prompt […]

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  23. jgard3 says:


    Nobody knows which raindrop transmuted our reservoir into a frothing bull that breached the levee, stampeding downriver, chased by debris. One moment, we marveled at the storm; the next, our recreational area transgressed its cage and reclaimed its territory: roads that scarred the landscape healed by a fresh, muddy skin, cloned McMansions gutted of their trophies, converted to bird houses.

    On higher ground, we found sanctuary in the high school, now a bed and breakfast for a thousand refugees. While we waited on our cots, calmer voices gathered to assign blame with flashes of insight, booming words of consolation.

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  24. […] The following was written for this week’s Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch. […]

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  25. We’ve had a few very cold nights here this past week and I’ve been enjoying many cups of tea. Actually a welcomed break from the heat. I was a little worried about my garden but it survived 🙂
    My FF this week is a true story from my childhood at Old Orchard Beach in Maine. I think I was somewhere around 10 – 12 years of age.

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  26. […] Carrot Ranch June 11, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about deep waters. It can be literal or […]

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  27. […] This was written with the prompt deep waters provided by the Carrot Ranch June 11 Flash Fiction Challenge. […]

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  28. […] Carrot Ranch Prompt (06/11/2020): In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story deep waters. It can be literal or metaphorical. Think of a place and person and situation. Explore. Bathe. Renew. Go where the prompt leads! […]

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  29. Liz H says:

    Here’s mine..a bit of a late entry:

    Still Waters

    “Okay, you can uncover your eyes now.”
    “Wow! That’s beautiful…and heartbreaking. Who made this mural?”
    “Trevor made this one. And take a few steps around this corner. This is one by Teresa. Yeah…it makes me tremble, too.”
    “Wait! Those quiet kids who never join in on anything?”
    “Apparently they just don’t join in on the things we’ve been offering.”
    “I had no idea.”
    “Neither did I. It seems those still waters run deep.”
    “So what do we do now?”
    “We go back to school. Donate groceries. Attend drum circles and honor Juneteenth.”
    “And never go back to normal?”
    [Link to blog post ]

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  30. Anca P says:

    Just found this challenge and here is my take on this week’s prompt. Can’t wait to read some of yours

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  31. ancapandrea says:

    My first time around, just found this. Can’t wait to read some, write some, connect with all of you

    I have a pocketful of dreams. Heavy, they forgot how to breathe. I drag my feet through the afternoon light, dancing over the surface. Shadows reach out from the abyss, and ghosts are all shadow. I don’t look back, the shore I can’t call home anymore. I stumble. It’s hope that tugs at the my feet, tiny and fleeting. The river runs slow and cold and blue. Do dark, almost black. Quiet and gentle and infinite. Not enough to drown the tears. I let go of my breath one last time. Between myself and I, only the deep waters.

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  32. […] Lofty Undertaking Source:  Flash Fiction Challenge Prompt: Write a story about justice for all. Word count:  99 […]

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